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Hi everyone hop you'll like my stories if I write them but know I'm not a good Arthur, I will be giving link to other websites where I write fanfics
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When does the Fnaf stuff be involved?
You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right-hand corner of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Why are there so many dislikes? The story premise sounds good to me.
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If this is for the FNAF stuff, the story is slow-paced so wait for it I'm not trolling
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The FNAF stuff comes in Remnant ch 1.1, which is out now, in the form of a Faunus Roxanne Wolf, not all of them will be human or Faunus some of them will be animatronics or Androids.
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Thank you
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Oh and the reason why there's so many dislikes it's probably because a lot of people came for the RWBY or FNAF stuff not Reading the short description where I said this story will be slow placed
Just in case nobody reads either the short or long descriptions I'm going to place this here in the comments that my fanfics not just this one are going to be slow paced.
Oh and I'm a new writer so yeah if the story sucks don't be surprised
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Hey I've deleted the FNAF tag but I'll re-added it once the FNAF stuff comes into play.
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That fine I'll wait
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Hey the first chapter for FNAF will be out after Remnant ch 1.2
This radiates insane cringe energy. I have to force myself to think it's a troll to not instantly gag.
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Good for you sweetie
This certainly included some interesting stylistic choices. I had never seen a fight seen written this way, with such a high level of detail, it gives it a novel table-top game feel. Some of the switches between first and third person made following it a little confusing, but I'm not discounting the idea that doing so was intentional.
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The switches between first and third person were Intentional, but it's because I'm just beginning and while my fanfic is slow paced.
I'm trying to move the story along as fast as I can so that Remnant ch 2.1 (the chapter where they will start going to Combat high school) can start.
That's when the humane 6 (the Equestria girls Twilight, Rainbow, Pinkie, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy) will enter the story.
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Also paragraphs that have nothing in front are third person and the first person ones have this ; in front of them.
This story has great potential and is a very interesting spin of RWBY and MLP. Only problems that I see are common across all new writers that I have notice is gramar and adding information that doesn't need to be in the actual story, for example '(Hey look I figured out how to install images hopefully I will be doing this for the Equestria Storyline and the FNAF storyline in later chapters)', I am happy you where able to figure it out to add pictures but this information takes away the attention from the story. This kind of information would fit better in a description, like you have at the top, only it would fit better at the bottom letting the reader see what you have inproved on and what the reader can help you with. As I said before this story has great potential, and like all writers you will inprove and will get better with time, don't give up and listen to the constructive criticism.
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I will do this for later chapters.
Though not all criticism is good criticism so I might not listen to that Sorry 😔.
And I'll need the key to be on top... Also I'm already writing 3 unpunished chapters but after Remnant ch 1.5 I'll find a way to take your advice into practice because of already written a significant amount for the chapters to come and I want to publish them two days apart from one another and they'll take time to write them in the way you have it here.
Very entertaining let's see where this goes !
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That's 100% ok you have your own writing style and you can write at the pace you want. It is true that not all criticism is not good and it is often down putting.
What I meant for the description is that there is a way, I personally don't know how, to put another one at the bottom of the story kinda like a closing info.
Can't wait to see where this story goes. Best of luck to you
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Thanks
And yeah that's what I'm planning on doing having info at the bottom after the chapter is over after Remnant ch 1.5 at 12/2/22
Hello everyone I just wanted to make an announcement on this fanfic comments that if this is what you should expect for the two coming chapters from the votes (vote) on my blog on what is the next step for this fanfic.
These are the questions that were on the blog.
1. Should I have Gregory as Glamrock Freddy son in this fanfic, or should I save Gregory for a different chapter, or do you hate Gregory and think he shouldn't be in the fanfic.
2. If Gregory is going to be in the fanfic, Should I make him into a Robot or human.
(The Robot will have the problem same one as in the game, that being were did he come from and why)
(The Human will have the problem of trouble law and other illegal problems, both for Gregory and for the Animatronics.
3. Should I have the villains make an appearance?
*For #2 I think they meant they didn't know how to answer the question.
Now what to Expected for the fanfic.
1. Gregory will be come Glamrock Freddy son.
2. Gregory will face some form of justice for is actions.
3. The villains or villain will show up briefly.
this looks interesting i'll get to this soon