This certainly included some interesting stylistic choices. I had never seen a fight seen written this way, with such a high level of detail, it gives it a novel table-top game feel. Some of the switches between first and third person made following it a little confusing, but I'm not discounting the idea that doing so was intentional.
This certainly included some interesting stylistic choices. I had never seen a fight seen written this way, with such a high level of detail, it gives it a novel table-top game feel. Some of the switches between first and third person made following it a little confusing, but I'm not discounting the idea that doing so was intentional.