This story has great potential and is a very interesting spin of RWBY and MLP. Only problems that I see are common across all new writers that I have notice is gramar and adding information that doesn't need to be in the actual story, for example '(Hey look I figured out how to install images hopefully I will be doing this for the Equestria Storyline and the FNAF storyline in later chapters)', I am happy you where able to figure it out to add pictures but this information takes away the attention from the story. This kind of information would fit better in a description, like you have at the top, only it would fit better at the bottom letting the reader see what you have inproved on and what the reader can help you with. As I said before this story has great potential, and like all writers you will inprove and will get better with time, don't give up and listen to the constructive criticism.

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I will do this for later chapters.

Though not all criticism is good criticism so I might not listen to that Sorry 😔.

And I'll need the key to be on top... Also I'm already writing 3 unpunished chapters but after Remnant ch 1.5 I'll find a way to take your advice into practice because of already written a significant amount for the chapters to come and I want to publish them two days apart from one another and they'll take time to write them in the way you have it here.

Very entertaining let's see where this goes !

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That's 100% ok you have your own writing style and you can write at the pace you want. It is true that not all criticism is not good and it is often down putting.
What I meant for the description is that there is a way, I personally don't know how, to put another one at the bottom of the story kinda like a closing info.
Can't wait to see where this story goes. Best of luck to you

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Thanks

And yeah that's what I'm planning on doing having info at the bottom after the chapter is over after Remnant ch 1.5 at 12/2/22