Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone! Can Celestia and Luna put together the clues and track down the culprit? Will they ever see those cookies again?
Set in the same "universe" as my main story, Into the Light! (Consider this a... soft prequel, I suppose!)
Featured November 14-16, 2022!
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Glad to see more of this verse from you. ;) Still cute!
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Thanks, man! Honestly, it's a shame how quickly I forget how nice it is to write in this setting. I think I am quickly realizing how much I enjoy writing all-ages cartoony stories, even if I still lean heavily into the high-fantasy haha
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This is exactly the demographic where my writing style and interests shine, which is why I'm still here strong. If you've ever seen 'Bluey' before, that's another shining example of my writing style, and the types of stories I want to tell. Showing healthy, positive relationships between friends and family, and subtly destroying toxic stereotypes along the way.
Oh, that was so freaking cute. ❤
Super cute story!
Kyoot... Too kyoot for this world.
That was a good story.
Thank you everyone so much for the kind words and the feature! I don't write new stories often but when I do I hope they put a smile on everyone's faces. ^^
If you want more filly hijinks featuring our beloved princesses, be sure to check out the novel I'm working on, Into the Light! I'm putting a lot of love and care into it, and it'd mean a lot to me if people would check it out. c:
So adorable!
They do look very cute in the cover art with those bows in their manes.
that's adoreble.
Woona and Celly fun
Ah, the simple life of a filly. When the most dramatic event is the disappearance of cookies.
relatable
well now i also want some of those cookies!
aww, that is so cute! love that ponies can do this because their backs are perfectly functional platforms
oh, to live under the Equestrian monarchy! to have the deference without the toxicity and exploitation that comes with such power imbalances. i can’t imagine it for humans but i can for ponies, which is why they are better than we are
hehe, though that makes sense for Luna being more stiff and formal when she is older. she really did like manners after all!
love how very Celestia Celestia’s mom is
and a satisfying resolution to the mystery! love how the clues fit together, with Luna’s use of a stepladder echoed in her needing to climb on Celestia’s back to fully get onto the counter, and the cookies being on Stella’s favorite plate. and of course, Luna lying to her sister because she felt neglected by her is adorable and understandable for a child to do, but i love how that foreshadows what happened between the two later with Nightmare Moon, intentionally or not.
super adorable, thank you for writing!