Dash Wants A Cookie

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Rarity and Rainbow Dash's Hearth's Warming Eve movie night takes a hilarious turn when an oversized scarf becomes the center of cozy chaos. Worst of all, cookies are at stake.

Part of Serina's Hearth's Warming Eve Collection for 2023.

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Artist

Artist #1 · Dec 7th, 2023 · 5 · ·

Cute.

justheretoreadstories

justheretoreadstories #2 · Dec 8th, 2023 · 2 · ·

That's some nice artwork.

DatGuy1st

DatGuy1st #3 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 2 · ·

sweet

Cerberusx

Cerberusx #4 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 2 · ·

The look in Rainbow Dash's eyes, as she stares longingly at those cookies is the same look I give alcohol.

Comment posted by Airwalker deleted Dec 9th, 2023

ThrowingPotato

ThrowingPotato #6 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 3 · ·

Nice

TSBrony2014

TSBrony2014 #7 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

When the story mentioned that Rainbow Dash was fidgeting I was half expecting Rarity to misinterpret the situation leading to questions such as the following:

1. Rainbow Dash, do you need to wash your hooves?
2. Rainbow Dash, Darling, do you need to freshen up?
3. Rainbow Dash, do you need to use the little fillies room?

And then after getting up and coming back some time later I would expect her to grab some cookies that way. While this isn’t something that I would do myself it seems like it would be in character for Rainbow Dash (with her being a bit of a prankster and all).

Serina

Serina #8 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 4 · ·

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Thank you!

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That's how I stare at Nacho Fries from Taco Bell haha!

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Yeah, I had the source linked and now it isn't linked anymore and now I have to go find it to link it all over again
Is that a new bug with FIMfiction or something? It's happened to stories I have posted recently.

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True. But then the scarf would have to come off.

Serina

Serina #9 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 2 · ·

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Found it! It's done by Raridashdoodles on Tumblr

Artist

Artist #10 · Dec 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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You’re welcome.

redandready45

redandready45 #11 · Dec 10th, 2023 · 1 · ·

This feels like a perfect setting for the short or a pre-school Scholastic book. The balance between fluffy friendship and comedy was well done!

Happy Holidays!

Serina

Serina #12 · Dec 10th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Aw thank you! I definitely found inspiration from the book If You Give A Mouse A Cookie when writing this story. I love kids books! Hopefully one day I can author some of my own.

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