With Twilight out of town, Spike is feeling lonely. Feeling sorry for him, the Cutie Mark Crusaders invite him to their clubhouse for a sleepover. But soon, things start to go bump in the night...
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spooky spooks ooooooo!
Love this little tale between Spike & the CMC in the Tales Of Friendship mini-series!
Hope to see them together again for another tale, maybe when Spike got his wings?
I'm surprised this isn't M rated with a premise like that. Could have gone a totally different direction . . . if you know what I mean
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I think they're WAY too young for that!
That was a good story.
11392986
Go to horny jail you heathen
Great use of foreshadowing! I'm not sure why I didn't connect the dots until Apple Bloom had the realization, but that just goes to show how good it was! I feel like they could of used this premise as an episode in season 2, considering there was already a sleep over episode in season 1. It certainly felt episode quality to me! Loved it.
A fun slice-of-life story with spooky (fun) undertones where Spike gets to feel wanted by the CMC. Fantastic! Have a pumpkin-spice cookie!
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It's been done before.
Aww that's actually really cute and he really miss Twilight
It just felt too...
Too lonely...
The Golden Oak Library how I miss that place so much
That's so sweet of you kids for inviting Spike I'm sure the little guy needs it and probably need to hang out with somebody his own age
Uhh I don't think this is a good idea
Oh yeah that's right I forgot Scootaloo has a big fear of listening to scary stories as we saw back in season 3 I mean I don't blame her I'll be scared too
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Yeah. Me to. I never did like the Castle Of Friendship. The Golden Oak Library felt much warmer, and homely. It really fit Twilight.
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Well it's not like that would stop a lot of the writers on this site
Me:*Looks at title* *Looks at description* *Looks at rating* "Uh... are you sure?"
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Maybe not. But I prefer not to go there.
Well written and cute, but it kind of lacked conflict.
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It was really just meant to be a fun, little story about the CMC and Spike doing something together.
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I get that and try not to take myself too harshly as others have before, but to be a story, it must have some conflict. It did, but only briefly:
"Are you okay?" Sweetie Belle asked, "What's wrong?"
"Nothing...I'm fine..." Spike replied rather halfheartedly.
"Are ya sure?" Apple Bloom inquired, "Y'all seem a little down in th' dumps."
The baby dragon sighed, "I don't know... I guess I'm just feeling a little...lonely..."
"Lonely?" Scootaloo repeated.
Sweetie Belle stepped forward, "Is everything all right with Twilight?"
This conflict is instantly solved a few sentences later.
Great sweet slice of life story! Halfway through I was convinced that the hooting was Owlicious trying to check up on Spike.
I would say this is a pretty nice story and a fun one too as well so it looks like spike is by himself for the weekend and once he was done with the chores he has nothing to do and basically he's all by himself so he decided to go out to do something but nothing until the Cutie Mark Crusaders saw him that he was down and wanting to know if he's okay he told him that Twilight is gone for the weekend so basically he was feeling lonely until the Cutie Mark Crusaders invited him to the sleeping party which that's pretty cool and once night time came around they all had it for the clubhouse and basically having a fun time and even tell a scary story but once they were done they were about to go to sleep until something goes bump in the night which it kind of scared the kids and basically they were running away and of course they were in a panic but then suddenly half the things they were running away was just some of the objects and even animals that they were overreacting so once they return to the clubhouse before the rain came they heard another noise again until Apple Bloom found out it was the bottle made that noise so basically it was the one that scared them but other than that they had fun and they all appreciate it Spike for protecting them and whenever they ever feel lonely they can always come together to have a hangout again very nice story keep up the good work
I always wonder why there weren't that many episodes with Spike hanging with the CMCs. I only saw them together during the Just for Sidekicks episode where Spike watches the Mane Six's pets. And also during the episode where Spike uses his fire breath to destroy that large block of ice from crashing (forgot the name of the episode.)
There should have been more episodes with Spike and the CMCs hanging out together. I mean granted, I'm pretty sure they hung out together off-screen, whether Spike was left behind by Twilight (poor Spike) or they hung out in between episodes.
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I fully agree.
Also while I am a sucker for roamnce. I did like how there was nothing romantic about this fic, just a bunch of kids hainging out like best buds