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Mr Movie Magic


An artist. A wonderer. A believer. A brony since 2016. Telling stories in the real and digital worlds.

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Spike has saved the Crystal Empire from King Sombra's reign of terror and from a frozen cloud impact. To show their appreciation and celebrate their hero, the Spike Fan Club invites the Great and Honorable Spike the Brave and Glorious to the Crystal Empire's first annual Spike Day.


Update: Originally written as one chapter, revisions (now complete) have allowed me to divide the story into two chapters.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

I liked it, it was a nice read ty :twilightsmile:

if i can(and this is in no way meant as anything bad, as i am the last person to have any right to say anything about some one elses work.) it felt a bit quick pasted, i would of loved to of had a few more chapters with seeing how spike and everyone reacted a bit more, and maybe stretched-out the festival some more. So i guess the short of it is, i would of liked more :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you again for the read, i enjoyed it :twilightsmile: i am a big Spike fan and always like to see him getting some well deserved praise or him being a bad ass :rainbowlaugh:

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Hello and thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate your feedback. Hearing what others have to say helps me see different points of view and I feel it helps me to improve my writing. I will work on adding more details to the story and expanding on parts where it may be too short.

Many thanks!

10058926
No thank you for writting it and i look forward to seeing more from you, again i enjoyed the story, i'm a big spike fan lol so any story where he gets to shine is good for me (though i am a Sparity fan myself lol) thanks for taking the time to reply :twilightsmile:

10058931
You're very welcome! I do have another Spike story called "The Magician's Gift," which I will post for Valentine's Day.

I don't want to give too much away, but it is the world of Ogres and Oubliettes. It is Hearts and Hooves Day and Garbunkle the Magician is on a quest to find the perfect gift for Princess Shmarity.

I hope you like this one, too!

10066094
thanks for the heads up, I'll look forward to reading it :twilightsmile:

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Hello, my friend! I know it has been a while, but I have begun to complete the revisions for "Spike Day." I will have them ready soon and I will notify you when it is posted. In the meantime, please enjoy my other stories, and in these rough times, take precautions and stay safe.

10228706
Great, I could do with some good reading atm. I look forward to it :pinkiehappy: Thanks for informing me and be safe :twilightsmile:

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Good news, I have completed the second chapter! Please let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy :twilight smile:

I bet that the whole country of Equestria will celebrate Spike day because (based on the first Cutie re-mark timeline) Spike saved, not just the Crystal Empire, but all of Equestria from Sombra.

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