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Hawk Noctis


Not much to say really. I like to write stories in my spare time. I hope to eventually publish a book, which I am working on at present.

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Shining Armor and Princess Cadence come to Ponyville to visit Twilight and her friends. They bring their son, Blazing Star with them and Twilight agrees to foalsit for the couple while they spend some time together exploring Ponyville. Twilight believes she can handle foalsitting for a few hours, but what will she do when Blazing Star suddenly disappears from the library?

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Comments ( 10 )

Uh oh, Twilight's already in over her head. :twilightoops:

690671 I never said I was 'Surprised' so to speak. :duck:

Also I think Pip MIGHT know something about where Blazing Star disappered to. :trixieshiftleft:

My theory, it ends with pip telling twilight something stupid like: "blaze said he was going to the bathroom", or " hes in the basement", "or hes reading a book". my guess then twilight is gonna twitch and have a convulsion or sometin and then:facehoof:

I've been waiting for the "Twilight-thinks-she's-responsible-enough-to-foalsit-and-ends-up-failing" story. This looks like it's going to be fun!:twilightsmile:

Uh-oh, spaghettio...

Following this, because things are about to hit the fan :twilightoops:

703340 Yep it's going to be "Lesson Zero" all over again. (and Twilight's forgetting she can just teleport) :facehoof:

Also you saw the OBVIOUS Metal Gear reference right? :trixieshiftleft:

Shining Armor is teaching his son to be a ninja? Somepony's going to be sleeping on the couch, methinks.

Poor Twilight! It's just like her to stress out over something like this, and this time it wasn't even her fault! Lovely story.

727739 At least Twilight didn't go all 'Lesson Zero' on us again, and she remebered she can teleport. :twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by Super Soldier deleted Mar 6th, 2018
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