It's been five years since the 'Too Many Pinkie's' incident, and despite Twilight Sparkle and co disposing of the clones one still remained. Her name is Detective Pinkamena, or 'Pink' for short. After a life on the run and foraging a life and career for herself in the Manehattan Police Department and climbing through the ranks and becoming a Detective. Pinkamena now lives a life separate from her original counterpart.
Until now. The past has a way of rearing it's ugly head in and it has a face and name to go with it. S.M.I.L.E. agent Sweetie Drops or 'Bon Bon' as she goes by now. Tasked by Celestia herself to contain the anomaly Agent Drops is now tasked with detaining Detective Pink.
Written by me and https://www.fimfiction.net/user/174091/ponyfag-not-brony
Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 were edited by: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/363323/Sebastian99
Featured on 10/24/22,10/25/22, 10/26/22,11/6/22, 11/7/22, and 11/20/22!
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Celestia..why are you even doign this. have an agent keep an eye on her fine but take her by force for question when all she has done is help ponies. WHat is it with you and making unnessecary enemies!?
I really wish there were more fics regarding the Pinkie clone. It is such a facinating plot line, similar to how changelings are able to infiltrate pony kind!
That was a interesting story goodluck with the rest of it.
oh no
RUN!!!! HIDE YOURSELF!!!
Your writing is so good
But I am not a fan of using the meta too much, still you wrote a really good story. Can't wait for more.
Looks like I have a bit of an omniversal mess to clean up after this one. You dun messed up Bon Bon, and Celestia should really know better at this point
Mirror Clone stories are the best!
This story made me realize two things:
Equestria has its own SCP foundation, and Pinkie is probably an SCP.
When have ponies ever been known to leave well enough alone?
Awesome opening chapter!
I'm eager to see how things play out in future chapters.
The thing I use to finally convince Twilight that this is a bad idea?
Maybe she can get out of there by using a Spy gadget.
I thought she would keep annoying the agents or something like that but she gave up really fast.
Let's see where the author goes with the story
Bon your life is not on the line here nor is Pink a threat to Equestria. She is a fucking cop for crying out loud. Was all of this worth it? She is a Pinkie Pie you should have some idea what she is like. Simple.observation wouldnhave been fine.
Seriously Celestia you owe many apologies here.
And now we need a kid named Hoof to come and clean up the scene of course
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Eh. Maybe a bit overly dramatic, but weird magical crap always happens in Equestria. Heck, if potions are a thing, imagine putting in overripe fruit into a potion vs "ancient unstable questionable magic from another pony for years" would do.
Are they even *really* a pony? But considering that Pinks is at least a bit more sapient and this is a G rating, we probably won't touch upon "meaning of life" and "are you alive" metaphorical quandaries.
I kinda have to ask, but what's going on with the tense, here? Why is "would" showing up in front of so many of these verbs?
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It's a quirk of our writing process or a bad habit. I went and changed this chapter. Sorry about that.
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S'okay, I was just wondering what was happening there.
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Considering this story has the comedy tag and not the dark tag, my hope is that this is a dumb plan of Celestia's to throw original Pinkie the ultimate surprise party or something.
I hope this ends well !
I didn't expect this to go in this direction.
Not really a fan of this, though I will keep cheering on you.
Protect protect protect protect protect protect protect protect
Bon Bon, you DID kidnap her. she commited no crimes and you took her against her will. THAT IS KIDNAPPING
SMILE is the SCP Organization of the Pony World. Which means there is a Dr Bright wearing the Alicorn Amulet nearby...
Beep beep beep
saul goodman in equestria not something i knew i needed but here we are
Okay Bon Bon. TELL CELESTIA AND TWILIGHT WHAT THEY ARE DOING! My god the idiot ball here. The last you you need is a rogue group answerable to noone.
I wonder if it turns out that smile set the groundwork for the reason pony kind became g5 in the first place?
god, Celestia keeping secrets from the new ruler I bet twilight doesn't even know about smiles or other secret guards or groups but the solar or lunar.
Got to love the breaking the fourth wall
That was a good chapter.
Of course nothing past bon bon when she's looking for the truth
I totally agreed
Well then this is a pretty interesting start of a story so it looks like the Clone Pinkie Pie made herself as a detective solving crimes which that's pretty good for her since that incident back in season 3 but it looks like her past is starting to catch up to her because special agent sweet drop AKA Bonbon found her and trying to take her away and of course the clone Pinkie Pie wouldn't go without a fight and thinking that Bonbon won some of the police officers who came out of nowhere to help out Pinkie Pie since she knows them and something tells me these two will not give up
I see the reference from the Breaking Bad spinoff
Well Pinkie Pie always know how to get everybody to dance with her
Well then things really got intense so it looks like Bonbon was going to talk with the lawyer who helped the Clone Pinkie Pie and apparently he got nervous and he had so many excuses to make a run for it and it doesn't help his situation too much when he run and it looks like the special agents who's with Bonbon gave Chase and Paul called Pinkie Pie to help him with the situation which she did and even getting the crowd all weld up but it looks like Bonbon was really in the bind now and apparently she really didn't want this to go this way and she wanted to protect somebody not just only for herself she even begged Pinkie Pie which she comply to it because Pinkie Pie did felt really guilty hopefully Bonbon will keep her promise
LMAO!
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Dr Hooves? (Or is that a different guy?)
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Maybe? Or there is a pony Dr Bright.
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S.M.I.L.E. is just a comedy rippoff of typical movie spy agency troupe. Fandom turned it into a monster hunter organization because equestria's supervillians are powerful magical creatures.
Equestria has democracy? What?
A british lawer would fits this story better than an american.
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I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED THIS!! Some one else noticed that when given a choice between making an ally or an enemy, Celestia always choose to make an enemy.
Monk
“Come into my parlor, Ted. I have cookies!” -Reykan
Well that chapter was dynamite:D
I hate this chapter.
I cannot see this particular Council existing. To even have Flim and Flam part of this council after what they pulled off. Heck unlike Pink they have actually committed crimes.
and Bon Bon. the mere fact they are doing this without knowledge or permission of the reigning Princess is a big difference. Means THEY ARE BREAKING THE LAW. Bon Bon you need to tell Twilight tell Celestia and Luna. this council cannot match three alicorns.
I hope Pinkie gets out and retaliate against them.
Remember when in episode 100 it was revealed that Bonbon‘s organization was taken down? I’ve got an interesting feeling here…
I declare bankruptcy!
The council lineup doesn't really make sense. I'd rather be inclined to believe if they were non-agents contracted to decide the fate of the subject.
This also sounds like S.M.I.L.E. is undermining Twilight's philosophy of "make friends, not enemies". Even more so that this organisation feels corrupt without Equestria's supervision
I'm so waiting for Pinkamena to pull Lyra and Celestia into scene just to make a point or expose the whole organization as corrupt & illegal to the public.