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As a wise man once said, "Let's kill da ho. Beetch!!!"

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Alex was an ordinary kid who always had a thirst for adventure. Just when he thinks his life is going to set into a routine a mysterious woman in a witch costume gives him a devil fruit. Now he's in Equestria as Monkey D. Luffy and ready to form his own crew. Where will the wind take him? What secrets does the world hold? Only the sea truly knows.

A One Piece Displaced.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 88 )

this is pretty, good keep it up!
i look forward to more chapters of this

It’s not bad start, say are you accepting OC’s?
Also if your interested I’ve done my own one piece Displaced fic, called Age Of Devil Fruit’s.

This looks pretty good. I'll watch out for it

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Anything in particular that made it a bad start? I'd love to make the story better.

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Sorry sorry, I ment to put not a bad Start. I’m so sorry for the misunderstanding.

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No worries. Mistakes happen :twilightsmile: . As for the OC's part of the comment, I've actually got a lot of the crew planned out.

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Gum-Gum, and nothing else. Drums start playing in the background.

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Okay, In any case, please let me know if you check out my One Piece story.

I have original devil fruits if you're interested

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I won't turn that down. I have a definite idea for one fruit I want to use, but fun power ideas are welcome.

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Rot-Rot Fruit: Anyone who eats it can controlling rot anything they touch. Rust metal, petrifie wood, etc.

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There's already a fruit like that. Shinobu the mature kunoichi of Wano has it.

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I thought it was something I made up

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With the number of canon fruits, easy to understand. I once thought, 'Why is there no fruit to make bombs?' Only to remember we got that back in Whiskey Peak.

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What about Steel-Steel fruit

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We got two that might fit that bill. Mr. 1's fruit that lets him become blades and that Whitebeard pirate that can turn into diamond.

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Diamonds are rocks, not metal

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I was thinking of the nature of the power. I was tackling it from the hardening aspect.

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Oh. I got Zap-Zap fruit

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Yes. Anyone who eats it can control, generate, absorb, and turn into pure electricity.

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Enel's rumble rumble fruit from Skypiea hits that mark.

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I was gonna avoid logia fruits for the crew anyway. It makes giving more characters haki a necessity.

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Well, I'm out of Devil Fruit ideas... Unless Slime-Slime is okay?

Is there gonna be a crew that are also displaced or nah

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As a permanent fixture? No. But if a displaced wanted to sail with the crew as a temporary ally during a crossover like Vivi or Carrot that'd be a different story.

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ah ok also on a scale to one to luffy how dumb is Alex gonna be

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Unless it's travel facts. Alex could tell you the national dish of Nepal but for other things? An example:
"Alex, who was the 39th president of the U.S.?"
"Trick question, we haven't had that many!"

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Oof well atleast he's smart in some things rather then nothin

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Despite his bluntness, Luffy is incredibly emotionally intelligent. Plus, he has the awareness to instantly spot who the strongest enemy is and knows unfairness when he sees it.

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Well thats good hopefully he gets an advisor or something to help him make choices down the road

damn deadass I cant wait to see where this goes. it's very interesting and has my attention already, cant wait for the next chapter.

If you'd like to borrow an OC for this story, let me know via PM.

Nice, a One Piece Displaced, I thought about making a Buggy Displaced but I'll wait til I finish my stories.

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But who could ever hope to defeat Buggy?

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So? That’s what the fruit is called in English.

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Yup, and it has the properties of both rubber and gum. :ajsmug:

So main character is going to be fighting Celestia when? Two Sun Gods cannot exist in the same world.

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Correction it is the human-human fruit model Nika. A Mythical Zoan that has the properties of a special paramecia (upon first consumption) and only upon fully Awakening the fruit can the user access the full properties of the sun god transformation.

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The gum-gum is actually the human-human model Nika

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Yeah sorry but it is true even with spoilers you have to avoid one piece altogether within the last few months to even think that the gum gum is still only a special paramecia.

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Just play along with the joke :rainbowlaugh:

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I know it's a joke but I haven't read the story yet if you look at my first comment on the story it's a direct question about when the two Sun gods are going to get into a fight

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The one person who canonically defeated him Roger

Wealth, fame, power. Gold Roger, the King of the Pirates, attained this and everything else the world had to offer, and his dying words drove countless souls to the seas. "You want my treasure? You can have it. I left everything I gathered together in one place. Now you just have to find it."

These words lured men to the Grand Line in pursuit of dreams greater than they'd ever dared to imagine. This is the time known as The Great Pirate Era.

You used a line from the 4Kids rap version of the opening...

CinemaSins adds 10,000 sins immediately. :trollestia:

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