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As a wise man once said, "Let's kill da ho. Beetch!!!"

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Grant Walker is a teenage boy with a strange life. He works for a secret organiization that protects the world from Angels and Demons, and he himself is a half Angel. That all comes to a screeching halt when he throws himself out of his world and into one of talking ponies. Will these new friends be able to help Grant get home, and will he be able to help them?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

EPIC
That was a great read:twilightsmile:

Not sure if want... the characterization was off and the wording is odd, they detract from the story a bit.

Also, when given an option if two things. The first and last are former and latter.

Former being the option said first and latter being the last said option, so instead if using 'the first one' use 'the former'.

It is interesting... I'm not sure I like the main character it's kind of like you're making him sound too much of a badass. Anyway, I have tracked and I cannot judge a story from the first chapter, I look forward to reading more.:pinkiehappy:

So she starts bitching on him about how "you have to die now, sorry about that. Lovely weather we're having by the way" and then she "reveals" that "it was all part of this test to see if you could live here peacefully 'n shit, where I try to kill you" ..
.........


I, am confused.

BAHAHAHA Celestia you crazy bitch :trollestia:

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