Luke has always been a One Piece fan and one day he found himself lurking around the Amazon website. To his surprise he found an amazing, crescent shaped, white mustache on sale. Luke had to have it. His Edward Newgate cosplay was finally going to be complete for the upcoming Comic-con.
It was too bad he would never actually make it...
On the plus side he is living a fan's dream right now, and getting his fill of adventure too! Now what to do with all these weird looking people telling him they are actually ponies...
Chapters (11)
Yes! A whiteboard fic! I hope to read more!
Sweet. I MUST CROSSOVER!!! Once your ready of course...
i love this
6408275 Heh, sounds like fun
6408281 do more plz...if ready of course
6408287 Next chapter will be next Tuesday
6408281 I'll wait til you're ready
this sounds awsome! ihave just one question though, Will he have whitebeards devil fruit abilites?
6408353 Naturally, devil fruits will be a big part of this story
Great start, keep it up:D
Nah, Garp was the strongest man in the world. He did not need no lousy fruit to destroy mountains.^^
6408393 It's the title given to Whitebeard in the manga and anime. I'm just using it for the title, but I agree about Garp
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Well, at least it didn't start out with the usual "set in stone" plotline. It's definitely worth looking into.
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6408453 Lol, that wouldn't work with what I'm gonna with this story anyway.
Sweet black fucking sabbath! All my yes! *drools on her keyboard*
You have my attention...
For now anyways
6408604 Heh, well I hope to keep it!
I was worried at first he was going to suffer from advanced age. Its a good thing you said otherwise. Whitebeard in his prime is a scary thought considering he could destroy islands towards his end but now he could possible be continent buster possible but unlikely planet buster.
6408767 Minor spoiler alert:
His body is what is actually in his prime. His devil fruit power and Haki however... Those he needs to practice at in order to get better. Otherwise writing a continent crushing Whitebeard wouldn't be as fun ^^
Then I read the bandit scene and Whitebeard was about to attack, I had a specific scene (0:40) in my mind.
Whitebeard is huge. So he could technically kick them just like that. I imagined the music too and of course the bandit-microphone-hold. That is a funny mental image!
6408792 Bahaha, it really is a funny image
Very nice first chapter. I wonder if the fact that Ponies are naturally attractive(possibly due to the magic flowing through it) will mix in with the One Piece concept of attractive to make all the mares buxom beauties. And I love the fact that, without Luke's knowing, he seems to already have Whitebeards knack for attracting many females whom want to be with and even serve him. XD Wonder if he'll ever realize he has such a quality about himself? XD
6408972 Heh, to be honest I didn't even think about any of that. I was mostly going to focus on the adventure aspect
ah anthroverse ponies, this should be fun, when does this take place in time of the show, I'm curious
6409033 Well, no doubt. But, figured that'd be an aspect to play into it along the way. After all, even without meaning to, Luffy already got two hotties to permanently join the crew. XD Bet it'd come about without Luke even meaning to.
6409037 Complete alt universe. Things are not staying the same like in the show
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Of course he needs to train himself. I'm just trying to guess what kind of madness will be created once he has fully mastered his new powers.
6409144 A lot if he gets pissed enough for sure
i thought this was about pete and petes arty
6409202 Nah, I don't even know what that show is
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I did as well...
6409050 Hah, probably.
Maybe one day he's just lounging on his future ship throne with waitresses/nurses serving him, his eyes suddenly snap open and he's all like, "Wait... How did I get all these girls to start serving me like this?"
6409974 That'd be hilarious. XD
6409279 really look it up its some good 90's nostalgia
6411024 I'll check it out, thanks
Very nice intro, looking forward to how you will develop it.
Good start, can't wait for more, seriously do some more, like, now! :)
But just to let peeps know, I've also started a story like this, but Mihawk instead of Whitebeard, and normal ponies instead of anthro, and so on.
6415035 Glad you like it!
6415038 so...manly... almost... to... much...
6417697 Haha
Another excellent chapter. Though early on, there's a part where you didn't put 'don't', forgot exactly where though.
6408393 6408403 His title of "Strongest" was in terms of his total 'power' not his physical strength. Not just his Devil Fruit but his massive fleets as well.
6419326 Hmmm... I'll look through it and see where it is.
6419334 Fair point.
i love this
keep'er going
*slow claps of approval*
Is there going to be a slaughter?
6419469 Whitebeard doesn't slaughter, he'll make it you never existed.