After confessing their mutual feelings toward each other, Twilight and Rarity have an awkward conversation as they plan their first date.
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Well that was Cute
Really nice and one of my favorite types of fics. I love your writing.
prop or jet turbine?
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BWAHA
Interesting and cute. Yeah, Rarity and Twilight don't exactly seem like the best of friends, and it was nice to see that explored.
Cute story! If I have one suggestion, it's that it might have been better to stick to just Twilight's perspective, given how much of the story involves her being unsure how to react to Rarity. Seeing Rarity's thoughts breaks us out of Twilight's thoughtspace.
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it's a third person story so it's not meant to be from anybody's perspective, but thank you for the advice