Thank you!

I loved the way that you wrote Trixie and her dialogue, as well as Firelight's character. Very spot on!
And the way Starlight discovered them was comedy gold!
Outstanding work!

This had been a fun read, I did like the pairing in this case. The clop is light but enjoyable, keep it up.

I like the end, it makes it seem like the fertility potion overrode Starlight's no foal potion but that's probably just me projecting

So does Starlight call Trixie "mommy" now?

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Thank you! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it!

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Since the story was getting long, I did decide to end it in a way that it'll be up to the reader's discretion about the conflicting potions; but, yeah, there is suppose to be some implications that it does exactly that. I'm glad you did pick up on that though, I was a little worried that folks would be confused about Starlight asking 'Cotton Candy' at the end.

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You're comment indirectly just made my day. I'm laughing right now since I'm not sure how Starlight would respond to that, especially since Trixie did ask Firelight to tell her some of those nicknames that he likes calling Starlight.