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Akataja


Just one of many MLP Fans out there :) also german writer, taking small commissions for stories and art

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9812442
a male acting and dressing like a female... but as a pony.

Could we get an epilogue? I want to know if she stayed in the Darkside!

9815976
There is indeed a 5th chapter, but I was not able to finish it before the deadline of the contest ^^

9818169
maybe later ^^ right now is a lot of work to do

OK, this is already weird, interesting but weird but interesting

This was amazing. Truly transcendent. Never before has a piece of fanfiction entertained me the way this one has. It has a bit of everything - comedy, drama, intrigue, excitement, and a complete and utter disregard for the rules of the English language. You had an idea and went for it despite the objections that any sensible person would have had, and I’m pleased to say that while this was certainly not the most technically competent fic, I not doubt it will prove to be the most entertaining one.

Good show. Bless you.

so..................is luna impregnated by rumble ?

Dam!! Worth the wait!!




Also, I have an idea for a story you could possibly write.

Dusk SHine (Genderbent Twilight SParkle, and is alicorn at this time) x Chrysalis, or maybe x Eris(Genderbent Discord). He is assigned with helping (Whichever villain you decide to do) reform, and they have to live with him. Lemon and impregnation in story. NO futa or herm.

Button followed him, but then he looked back one more time he saw the mare from Orion and “D-Dude? Look!” Rumble turned around just in time to see that the mare was going into the stallions bathroom “I... I think you just tongue wrestled with a dude, dude.”

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Wish there was a sequel to this wonderful story!!

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