(R63 Twilight x Rainbow Dash story)
After getting some quick advice from her friend Elusive, Rainbow Dash visits the library to read the latest Daring Do book, as well as tell Dusk Shine how she feels about him. Hopefully she can.
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@Blueninetails...
Just a quick note/correction: I think you meant Prismatic Dusk for your fan-fiction title.
this seriously needs a continuation of sorts. me gusts.
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Right. Thanks for pointing that out to me.
Not gonna lie, don't normally read r63. Of course, I always make exceptions for Twidash. And I'm glad I did. That was cute, even if it could do with a bit of editing here and there (couple missing words and the like, but nothing serious). Well done, and fluffy as all hell.
A DuskDash story
Oh hell fucking yeah
Why is that your Rule63 x normal shipfics are so good?
I would like to say I'm glad to find another story like this and that I'm very pleased with the results.
But it's been one of those days where the smallest of things reminds me of stuff, and this is all I can think of when I see the word Barbara.
Good story though.
Oh that was great. Needs a Prince Dusk/Dash sequel.
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I concur
also woot 60th upvote
You might want to rewrite your synopsis. It's not clear that Rainbow is a mare before you start reading.
That was sweet. I am not one for partial Gender Flipped Stories, but this was amazing. Great job. I can't wait to read the sequel.
Curious about the sequel, but if it is anything like this, I will be very happy.
can't help but think this would be better if it was just a regular Twidash but I'm loving it all the same.
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You better be proud of this.
1) it kept my attention with no sex or violence.
2) It made an old pessimistic bat smile all through the last paragraphs.
Stories don't have to be plowing the mare, or violent battles to be good. Sometimes its the simple things.
So be proud of your art, you pansy! ; )
The Monk
So nice reading a romance Dusk Shine fic that isn't harem or clop. Certainly a rare gem.