There are so many note worthy things to understand and comment in this chapter. A single one won't do it justice! Main thing for me in my extremely biased mind, is the impression which both Celestia and Luna left me with when they entered the room in their black and golden latex outfits. Supported by this 'boss like' track that accompanied them. I had chills going through my spine. Did I mentioned I'm extremely biased towards these mires, in a very good way? This party is just going to be awesome with big chances of rutting. Tho for some pink alicorns maybe even others. We shall see. Orgasms can happen even without rutting, as we saw!
On a very different note, I fear for Arkhip. Apparently his visit to equestria has started with 2 very naughty bat ponies. Then later on a very naughty princes of love high on aphrodisiac tincture mixed with estrus. Purple book worm and two BDSM like queens! Will he survive his new life in Equestria? It's all an uncertainty at this point!
That being said, I loved the 2 bat ponies and the game they played with him. Very nice fruit salad to greet him in his new life on this planet with many possibly 'lonely' mares! Their game was fun. Could he repeat it later with them or possibly others, maybe princesses? I guess we will have to keep reading to find out. I know quite a few that can use such a game in Equestria and even have fun with it.
I appreciate the occasional play with udders and tits. In stories with human females, the male almost always pays attention to the breasts as well. For ponies it should be the same with their version of breasts! Sadly I find very few stories even mentioning that part of the pony anatomy.
On another side note I want to order fisting of at least a few more ponies as the story goes along. It was quite fun. You have no idea how hard it is to find a good story with it in a pony world!
Yeah, the chapter turned out to be really long and intense. I only read the whole thing in two evenings.
However, thanks for the comment, my friend. As always, you know the plot, and the most piquant details, right after me. You even have the privilege of knowing what's going to happen in the next chapter before other readers.
The impressive appearance of Celestia and Luna in the room of Cadence to participate in the party, all accompanied by a music track, is what I also like in this chapter. So I lost count of how many times I reread this moment.
And it would be logical to assume that it is these sisters who will show spectacular scenes in the next chapter. Besides, I'm just looking forward to when the image of these princesses, who are also in seductive costumes, will be ready.
I officially declare that this author was accused of something he did not do, and as a result, this account was banned. But I promise that the continuation of this story will be written already on my account. It will be "volume 2" and it will also have a link to this initial part of the story.
But now all the following chapters will be written by me and continue the story of Arhip. In these chapters, he will finally be able to get acquainted with Vinyl Scratch and Octavia, as well as with Derpy and Dinky. Then he would go in search of Minuette.
And of course, the Princess of Love will visit Arhip many more times.
Хехех... Да, я заметил. Хотя эту главу я написал за полтора суток. Всплеск вдохновения и желания. Как будто, Каденс сама присутствовала рядом со мной в те часы.
Мутить с принцессами это скорее одно из испытаний и бесценный опыт для гг, перед тем как его выпустят в самостоятельную жизнь. Нуу, дааа, он будет немного приблатненным. Связи со всеми принцессами могут стать в последствии не только полезными для гг, но и выйдет геморрой. Причина для многих конфликтных моментов в сюжете. Смекаешь мой замысел? (хах, интересно, это кто-то будет переводить на английский?)
Спасибо за твой комментарий, а я понемногу продолжу писать с моего телефона. Но сейчас я набиваю руку, редактирую/обновляю главу 5 в первой истории. Там и в правду много над чем нужно поработать, чтобы сделать историю лучше.
There are so many note worthy things to understand and comment in this chapter. A single one won't do it justice!
Main thing for me in my extremely biased mind, is the impression which both Celestia and Luna left me with when they entered the room in their black and golden latex outfits. Supported by this 'boss like' track that accompanied them. I had chills going through my spine. Did I mentioned I'm extremely biased towards these mires, in a very good way?
This party is just going to be awesome with big chances of rutting. Tho for some pink alicorns maybe even others. We shall see. Orgasms can happen even without rutting, as we saw!
On a very different note, I fear for Arkhip. Apparently his visit to equestria has started with 2 very naughty bat ponies. Then later on a very naughty princes of love high on aphrodisiac tincture mixed with estrus. Purple book worm and two BDSM like queens! Will he survive his new life in Equestria? It's all an uncertainty at this point!
That being said, I loved the 2 bat ponies and the game they played with him. Very nice fruit salad to greet him in his new life on this planet with many possibly 'lonely' mares! Their game was fun. Could he repeat it later with them or possibly others, maybe princesses? I guess we will have to keep reading to find out. I know quite a few that can use such a game in Equestria and even have fun with it.
I appreciate the occasional play with udders and tits. In stories with human females, the male almost always pays attention to the breasts as well. For ponies it should be the same with their version of breasts! Sadly I find very few stories even mentioning that part of the pony anatomy.
On another side note I want to order fisting of at least a few more ponies as the story goes along. It was quite fun. You have no idea how hard it is to find a good story with it in a pony world!
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Yeah, the chapter turned out to be really long and intense. I only read the whole thing in two evenings.
However, thanks for the comment, my friend. As always, you know the plot, and the most piquant details, right after me. You even have the privilege of knowing what's going to happen in the next chapter before other readers.
The impressive appearance of Celestia and Luna in the room of Cadence to participate in the party, all accompanied by a music track, is what I also like in this chapter. So I lost count of how many times I reread this moment.
And it would be logical to assume that it is these sisters who will show spectacular scenes in the next chapter. Besides, I'm just looking forward to when the image of these princesses, who are also in seductive costumes, will be ready.
I officially declare that this author was accused of something he did not do, and as a result, this account was banned. But I promise that the continuation of this story will be written already on my account. It will be "volume 2" and it will also have a link to this initial part of the story.
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This musical track was planned to be used in the description of the "Arhip and Twilight Dance" scene.
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But now all the following chapters will be written by me and continue the story of Arhip. In these chapters, he will finally be able to get acquainted with Vinyl Scratch and Octavia, as well as with Derpy and Dinky. Then he would go in search of Minuette.
And of course, the Princess of Love will visit Arhip many more times.
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А все ровно, тебе понравилась эта глава? Ведь я вкладывался по полной, когда писал. Я вложил душу.
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Хехех... Да, я заметил. Хотя эту главу я написал за полтора суток. Всплеск вдохновения и желания. Как будто, Каденс сама присутствовала рядом со мной в те часы.
Мутить с принцессами это скорее одно из испытаний и бесценный опыт для гг, перед тем как его выпустят в самостоятельную жизнь. Нуу, дааа, он будет немного приблатненным. Связи со всеми принцессами могут стать в последствии не только полезными для гг, но и выйдет геморрой. Причина для многих конфликтных моментов в сюжете. Смекаешь мой замысел? (хах, интересно, это кто-то будет переводить на английский?)
Спасибо за твой комментарий, а я понемногу продолжу писать с моего телефона. Но сейчас я набиваю руку, редактирую/обновляю главу 5 в первой истории. Там и в правду много над чем нужно поработать, чтобы сделать историю лучше.
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А то!
Хотя и раньше с ними всё хорошо было.
Читать одно удовольствие.