I like how happy Derpy is when she is granted a leave. She is just like a little filly! I love it!
I want to express my doubts towards Flawless Tango. It's most likely my bias against characters that come out of nowhere. However go Rainbow Dash coming out of nowhere and spreading cutie marks. .... ya, definite bias against Flawless Tango. Just ignore me.
By the way, if Dinky wants to bind herself. She needs to talk with Mango and Strawberry.
Something that no one will understand, but I vote Dinka for president! :P
Sorry my last post was this short, but was sleepy them. Yet I know I wanted to mention a lot more things when reading it.
I like how forward Dinky is and she isn't afraid of sexual things. Kinda reminds me of me when I was young. In the beginning I like her was sneaking and observing my surroundings. I, like her managed to find sexual things. Tho all I could find at home was an anatomy book in Russian. Of course I didn't understand anything, but the pictures! There was also this book with sexual positions. Later on the internet came to the rescue! Anyway I can definitely see her trying to match her mom with Arhip when they meet.
As for her comment about tying her mom. I can definitely see that happen. There are a couple of fruit bat ponies that will definitely be happy to help. Also since most of the things in this story connect at some point. I can use my 'prophetic powers' like Dinky and predict we are going to see Rainbow Dash at some point again. However she has hard time standing in one place. Tying seems like a good remedy against that. I imagine Dinky being taught by the bat ponies, or more in her character. Spying on them to learn how to do it. Not only Princesses can spy you know!
I also love the scene in which Derpy got her cutie mark. She needs show that dance to Arhip. Not just recount it from memory, but actually demonstrate it to him, in a lot more details then the brief explanation here in the train. Of course a certain filly will be told to get out for that moment. However I don't see her agreeing to that part, or at least she will get out, but again spying can be applied here as well! It all will depend on where and how it happens, but it HAS to happen!
I apologize to all readers... But I accidentally published an incomplete chapter (8)! Yes, there is eroticism there. But I have to keep my promise. I'll show you the dance, through Twilight's eyes. Therefore, I returned this chapter to the editorial office. I have to work hard.
I like how happy Derpy is when she is granted a leave. She is just like a little filly! I love it!
I want to express my doubts towards Flawless Tango. It's most likely my bias against characters that come out of nowhere. However go Rainbow Dash coming out of nowhere and spreading cutie marks. .... ya, definite bias against Flawless Tango. Just ignore me.
By the way, if Dinky wants to bind herself. She needs to talk with Mango and Strawberry.
Something that no one will understand, but I vote Dinka for president! :P
Sorry my last post was this short, but was sleepy them. Yet I know I wanted to mention a lot more things when reading it.
I like how forward Dinky is and she isn't afraid of sexual things. Kinda reminds me of me when I was young. In the beginning I like her was sneaking and observing my surroundings. I, like her managed to find sexual things. Tho all I could find at home was an anatomy book in Russian. Of course I didn't understand anything, but the pictures! There was also this book with sexual positions. Later on the internet came to the rescue!
Anyway I can definitely see her trying to match her mom with Arhip when they meet.
As for her comment about tying her mom. I can definitely see that happen. There are a couple of fruit bat ponies that will definitely be happy to help. Also since most of the things in this story connect at some point. I can use my 'prophetic powers' like Dinky and predict we are going to see Rainbow Dash at some point again. However she has hard time standing in one place. Tying seems like a good remedy against that. I imagine Dinky being taught by the bat ponies, or more in her character. Spying on them to learn how to do it. Not only Princesses can spy you know!
I also love the scene in which Derpy got her cutie mark. She needs show that dance to Arhip. Not just recount it from memory, but actually demonstrate it to him, in a lot more details then the brief explanation here in the train. Of course a certain filly will be told to get out for that moment. However I don't see her agreeing to that part, or at least she will get out, but again spying can be applied here as well! It all will depend on where and how it happens, but it HAS to happen!
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I'm glad that you at least paid attention to the fact that I told my version of how Derpy got her cutimark.
I didn't quite understand that. Where did you get this from? I didn't write about it. Or are you starting your fantasies again?
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My bad she meant tying herself, but still tying was involved!
Everything else in my comment is valid!
I apologize to all readers... But I accidentally published an incomplete chapter (8)! Yes, there is eroticism there. But I have to keep my promise. I'll show you the dance, through Twilight's eyes. Therefore, I returned this chapter to the editorial office. I have to work hard.
Метка за сознание пенных вечеринок. Оригинальная предистория пузырьков Дёрпи.
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Даа... Спасибо за то, что заметил это, в отличии от всех.