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"Friendship is an island that you retreat to. And you fall on the floor and laugh at all the ninnies who don't have enough brains to have your good taste." --Ray Bradbury

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Princess Luna is asked by Loona the Hellhound to help her remember why she became an orphan. Once the awful truth is discovered, Luna offers hard-won advice to the young wolf-girl.

Rated Teen for Loona's filthy mouth. (Tsk. Teenagers!)
Loona is from Helluva Boss

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 32 )

That was better than I expected. :moustache: I like this fanfic and wish you well on your fanfic endeavors.

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Truth be told, I wasn't sure I could get this tale to work. I'm glad you liked it.

This was really good to read.

Do any of the female characters in Helluva Boss throw any punches?

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Well, Loona tore up a few bad guys in the last episode. Millie, the female Imp, enjoys axing or shooting her opponents. If Luna had asked Loona what she did for a living, Loona would have to say, "Pest Control." You know, for diplomacy's sake. :raritywink:

Great read, I've never given much thought to the the helluva boss back story, and its not all sad, its more so bitter sweet.

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Yeah, bittersweet stuff works for me. I don't like to read stories that make me want to frag myself. I sometimes write rough stuff, but I still have a marshmallow for a heart.:raritystarry:

I love Helluva Boss.

And man, you made Loona and Luna feel so relatable.

This is a wonderful story that deserves more attention.

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Thank you very much. Thanks for the watch, too!:pinkiehappy:

Very nice story ^^

This would be heart-wrenching even more if this was in fact canon: Loona's parents abandoning her as a pup of course. It's no wonder why she's angry most of the time and can only seem to find comfort in alcohol:pinkiesad2:.

Aw! This was so sweet! Can't wait to see a Moxxie and Millie one. Wonder who they cold meet. The Cakes, maybe (a happily married couple with kids.)

(Awwww... Loona's adorable. And Luna's wise. A perfect combination really!)

Now will Octavia meet Octavia?

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It's the two male main characters that mostly use guns, in fact. The two female ones are far more physically violent.

This was a nice character study of Loona. Any plans for Millie/Moxxie in Equestria?

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If I can think of anything, sure. Since Millie and Applejack have thick southern accents (and farm experience), they might get along.

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There's an old saying: hurt people hurt people. When I find out that Loona was adopted at such a late age, I knew that would be a good hook for the story I wanted to write.

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OOH!! thatd be neat! Maybe they can relate on complicated family life! Octavia and vinyl and Octavia and stolis

Dan

Damn, my heart has already been aching over Roxanne Wolf, and now I read this.

Like...having Stolas's daughter would be the only way this could've been made better.

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Stories like this only need two people. I'm not sure what Octavia would do and not mess up the pace of the story. I think Octi can relate to having a shaky family environment.

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Like I said, that's the only way I could see this story be improved and that's because I love both Loona & Octi.

As it is, I greatly enjoyed this one-shot.

Curious on who Spike interact with?

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No idea. It's not easy to find pairings that make good stories.

This is actually really sweet, I loved this.

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Thanks very much!:twilightsmile:

“I never drink when I’m on the clock. Besides, aren’t you too young for that sort of thing?”

Loona Is Canonically 22 Years Old In Helluva Boss

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True. However, this is the first time Luna has laid eyes on a Hellhound, so it's easy to get her age wrong. I'm glad you like the story.

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