I'm older than your average brony, but then I've always enjoyed cartoons. I'm an experienced reviewer, EqD pre-reader, and occasional author.
Luster Dawn is a promising young student at the School of Friendship, but somehow, she just doesn’t get it, and her grades have slipped. With the past and present perfectly aligned, Trixie will once again give somepony the most precious gift she ever has.
Written for DrakeyC as part of the 2021 Jinglemas story exchange. Thanks to ROBCakeran53 for pre-reading.
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This was fantastic. Trixie's charming egotism was in top-form, and I love how you filled in Luster's character to fit the canon. I appreciate the conversation was mutual give-and-take, and loved how you worked the classes into things and explored friends and family in the theme of the season. The ending sucker-punched me right in the feels and it hurts so good because it was just a great capstone to everything.
Wonderful, wonderful story. Thank you so much.
Why do you write things that you know will make me sad?
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Due to a complex series of wagers, that is one of the check boxes I have to tick before publishing. I don't know why the yakuza decided to single you out, but I wasn't in a position to ask.
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Wouldn't you know it? My lucky day....
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Agree on all fronts.
This was a really sweet story. Great show of Trixie's character in both the good and obnoxious (in her own loving way of being Trixie). The end really got me, too, I had to read it twice.
Glad your recipient liked it!
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Well, the situation did get that way somehow, so... you imagine the prequel.
Just enough foreshadowing so that when you began to build towards the reveal I was neither ahead or behind. And then
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