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After abdicating the throne, the princesses move to a quiet place. Now they can realise all their boldest ideas or simply enjoy a well-deserved rest. At least, that’s what Celestia thought before she went outside...

I wrote this story a long time ago, but it’s only been translated now. Thanks Doof for translated

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Really rather enjoyable. Great ending!

But that title doesn't convey her full alicornitudeness!

She took off graciously to the sky, spied her new abode, and teleported away right onto its steps. Only with the door shut, she allowed herself to breathe out. Her first day free of the burden of power was more exhausting than a monarch’s routine. That would stick in her memory for sure!

An irony I find quite relatable.

Good story sir!

The queen mum is still "Her Majesty" even when a new queen sits on the throne.

This does get me wondering if Celestia ever managed to shake these ponies of their adoration habits, or if she eventually just became a sort of "hey you ponies, get off my lawn!" sort.

Heck, if the latter, that could perhaps explain where she went by G5--someplace where she could get some actual solitude. :rainbowlaugh:

Congratulations on your cute slice of life story making it to the news feed. Have an upvote & I hope to see more stories from you later!

Hmm you say that this is translated from something that is not English right? There are some things a bit off.

The purple carpet decorated with designs covered the floor, the walls mirroring it with the dark blue of cloud patterns.

Here It seems that it would be more appropriate the indeterminate article, as, especially with the carpet, it's not a specific item with some significance [in contrast with the pillow just after that.

But if there is the lack of anything

Same here "a lack of anything"

This is such an adorable read and very believable of what the retired princesses could face! Absolutely beautiful story and nicely translated! Hope ya didn't mind, but I couldn't resist making a reading of this fic of yours!

Audio Link!: https://youtu.be/5phgEs1FTgw

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

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And if they ever got around to abolishing the monarchy, she's been in the political game for more than long enough to get elected. That goes for the real one, too; the difference between sixty years and a thousand is far less than the raw ratio implies.

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I just had a vision of Celestia's grand scheme to quit being a princess (it gets old after a thousand years) and become La Presidente! It's all of the power with none of the nonsense. Celestia wearing a Castro hat and smoking a cigar while micromanaging Equestria from her new, sunny tropical capitol would be epic.

I love this xD simple, sweet and amusing.

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An irony I find quite relatable.

Good story sir!

I am really happy that you liked my story.

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She literally created this country)

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Heck, if the latter, that could perhaps explain where she went by G5--someplace where she could get some actual solitude

Maybe ;)

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You can laugh, but real-life fans of celebrities can be anything from obsessive to downright insane.

You know what inspired Stephen King's book Misery: a man walked up to him claiming to be his number one fan.

That same man would later assassinate John Lennon.

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This will be a problem. I have a good stories, but my English is bad

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Yes. My English is bad.

I will be think about that when back to home.

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Wow ! I never thought I'd hear my story in English. Thank you very much :)

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Yeah, things like that admittedly makes me a little leery of fame, should I ever happen to obtain it, as I know it'll come double-edged. :unsuresweetie:

Celestia sits at dinner with the bag, "Soooooo, would you like an...mmmmmmm..... banana? Let me just reach right here into my banana bag." :trollestia:

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