@tailsopony you have a way with words. this story is so incredibly fucked up yet so hot

fwiw I enjoyed the story, the setup was well worth the payoff.

this particular bit of non-con was hnnnnnnnng, the way you interleave sex with power fantasy:

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He didn’t answer. Instead she felt his gaze grow more intense, dancing up and down her body. Was he looking at her crotch? She shifted her tail to cover herself better. He stepped closer.

“Red, why aren’t you going to get her? I’m waiting.” Her patience was wearing thin.

“I’m not getting Spoony, Diamond. She needs to rest.”

Diamond’s eyes shot open, watching incredulously as he climbed up into the bed next to her. “You wouldn’t.”

Red chuckled, his laughter strangely cruel. It sent a chill down Diamond’s spine. “I am.”

Diamond glared down his body, and saw his raging hard cock. She let out a frustrated sigh, leaning backwards in the bed. “Whatever.” She spread her legs, and uncovered her pussy for him.
...

the slow build up of tension, release and subversion are really well done

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Thanks! I really like that scene. Has some flaws, for sure, but definitely something I enjoy. People don't seem to like this story, but I still like it. lol. I'll probably hate the next thing I write, but people might like it. I always have this weird cycle of things...

I see chapter 4-7 as having updated in my feed, however chapters 1-3 have an added 'New' suffix. In what order should I consume this update? Any more information on what changed? EDIT: Oh I should probably have read the story description.

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Sorry, didn't mean to pop for it to register as "updated" because really it was just a formatting update with a lot of small edits from one of my pre-readers. The content is the same, but I couldn't figure out how to update it properly since it basically went from 30 some odd chapters (wtf was I thinking?) to 8.

I just don't know what went wrong!