Diamond Tiara rules over her company and much of Manehattan from her ivory tower. Silver Saddle is looking for a promotion. Red Tape just wants to settle down. A kidnapping, a murder, and a heaping of debauchery join them together in unexpected ways
11077577 You know, if all they have to do is throw the cockring into Mt Doom, they could just wait for Beorn to have a honey taco night. I'm sure it's on the menu at some point. Everybody has a taco night.
That's a solid point. It's just weird to me that there are no comments. Usually I get something popping up down here. That coupled with the decidedly mediocre rating leads me to believe folks don't like this one. Which I find interesting, because I sorta do. I usually don't like my stories. lol
rating leads me to believe folks don't like this one
Without a clear-cut storyline to catch the readers, it's difficult to get hooked, which prevents an early upvote. (If you want more detailed feedback I prefer PM.)
11077577
You know, if all they have to do is throw the cockring into Mt Doom, they could just wait for Beorn to have a honey taco night. I'm sure it's on the menu at some point. Everybody has a taco night.
That's a solid point. It's just weird to me that there are no comments. Usually I get something popping up down here. That coupled with the decidedly mediocre rating leads me to believe folks don't like this one. Which I find interesting, because I sorta do. I usually don't like my stories. lol
What do you mean by that?
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Well, I mean that I can't promise you that there are ghosts.
But I also can't promise that there aren't ghosts.
I wouldn't worry about it too much.
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Without a clear-cut storyline to catch the readers, it's difficult to get hooked, which prevents an early upvote.
(If you want more detailed feedback I prefer PM.)