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I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.

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This is a one-off story to my main series Reformed Unicorn Group Podcast

The RUG decides to give streaming a live lunch at Twilight's favourite place to eat a go, ready to try something new for their fans and followers from their podcast series. However, this will be a meal no pony would be expecting.

Inspired by the artwork RUG IRL Stream by Doodle-Mark on DeviantArt.

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I should be working... :facehoof:

“And I will have a berry twist special,” Tempest nodded.

Of course she would.

"Can we have dessert?"

dang now I'm hungry

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Meanwhile, I'm actually having fruit XD

Thank goodness I was eating breakfast when I read this, otherwise I would be very hungry
And good on Sunset for being brave enough to admit that as a human she's eaten meat, she likes it and is willing to try it as a pony. And yay, friendship lesson :twilightsmile:
Good story

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Thank you for the compliment ^^

Wow I wasn't expecting the story nice to see you even though it's a spin off but hey pretty cool and it looks like r u g are doing a little bit live streaming by the technology is getting much better I mean look at the technology in the My Little Pony new generation although it was pretty funny to see the reaction that Sunset it's asking for meat anyway that was a pretty fun one keep up the good work

"And looks like Rainbow has sent several angry faces..." Tempest trailed off, "I wonder why?" She asked herself. Trixie and Starlight gave each other knowing looks.

Rainbow seriously needs help because it seems like she is an alcoholic at time.

Nice story! Very entertaining!

"Can we have dessert?"

Who was asking for desert?! 😂

Not one mishap. Not even from Lyra Heartstrings. I'm glad Sunset Shimmer provided a friendship lesson. Twilight would be proud of you, Sunset.

Comment posted by DecoGalileo deleted Feb 17th, 2022

I have a question (not to be rude or anything)
If it is the Reformed Unicorn Group, why there are only mares and and why they are the only ones in the gang? If it is a group of reformed unicorns, then our other reformed dudes who are unicorns who used to be antagonists or used to have a bratty, rotten attitude would be there (such as Stygian, Neighsay, etc.)

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I mainly focused (as well as the art) on Twilight's closest unicorn friends really, which I wanted to base the artwork around

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Oh, alright. I kept thinking of other reformed unicorns since the Reformed Unicorn Group Podcast story was released. I DID imagine if some other unicorns unicorns were there too :twilightblush:

Sunset held her iPad in her red magical aura as she got the camera set on the group. it was a sunny day in Ponyville, the warmth of the Solar Pricness’ sun bringing a nice day across Ponyville. The group were stationed outside where they were having their Livestream lunchtime break. With a decree of consent by the Princess of Friendship and Mayor Mare, they were able to set the connection up around town, abling ponies to see their lunchtime shenanigans.

Princess*

“With that being said,” Sunset continued to giggle, “Let’s get some grub!” The others nodded and, with the iPad still in Sunset’s magical gasp, opened the double doors. Once inside, they were hit with the smell of hayfries in the oil bath, carrot dogs sizzling and strong coffee and beverages being poured. With Princess Twilight giving the place her unofficial royal seal of approval, thanks to a certain mishap with the CMC, and with the rush of students at the School of Friendship, the place was packed. The sound of laughter of munching of filled gave the place comfort and relaxation as conversation flowed by. The group took in the sights, smells and sounds of the place before they found a secluded corner so their Livestream wouldn’t get interrupted too much.

You should remove of filled

“Thank you for your orders,” Quick Cheque hastily scribbled the final beverage down before tucking the notepad back under her wing, “I will go and collect them and then I will take your food.” The unicorns smiled and nodded in acknowledgement, the pegasus trotting down merrily to the drinks counter.

take your food makes no sense. It should really say "and hopefully you all have decided what you'll have when I get back."

"Could I have a look at the griffon menu?" Sunset repeated her request. The others around the table looked a tad greener. The chatbox was filled with pony faces of puking pony-emojis." Sunset sighed heavily.

You don't need that " after emojis.

“And I will have a berry twist special,” Tempest nodded.

What you did there - we see it! :trixieshiftright:

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