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30 years. 30 years since Sunset has been gone from Equestria. A simple error within the mirror portal prevented Sunset from going back and forth to Equestria at ease, now with the mirror portal fixed, how much has changed within Equestria?
Time dilation and technological progress does funny things towards a certain fiery maned unicorn.
Story will be set in an Equestria with 1950s-1960s technology. And inspired by the wonderful art drawn by Light262.
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I'm hooked and look forward to finding out what exactly has happened in the last 30 years in Equestria.
Interestingly enough, Google Chrome suggested this to me in the feed page you get when opening it up to a new tab.
Will give it a go!
Hi! Love this story, just wanted to say.
I wonder if Applejack and the other element bears were killed or had survived through the wars? I look forward to see what answers will be folded in the upcoming chapters.
Oh Boy. This just got heavy. Now I'm wondering what part Tempest played though since they're tagged, In my mind I wouldn't be surprised if she was essential to the war effort, what with her experience.
But this is all guesswork! I look forward to the next chapter!
This is so exciting. I wonder who the new bearers of the elements will be.
Im going to guess 4 of the 6 elements will be Sonata, Sunset, Starlight and Tempest just from the Thumbnail and tags. But still. I will DEFINITELY look forward to seeing that. Also I wonder, since Tempest will obviously be prominent, what role she took in the wars...
Makes me excited for the movie
This is actually fantastic.
Do the other two Dazzlings appear, or is it just Sonata?
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Just Sonata.
They've become too uncaring about death. They would rather have innovation than
peaceharmony. They have become unworthy of the Elements of Harmony. Will they change? Will the Elements accept them again?Booyah! My prediction was off (or is it?), but my theory was correct!
How could they? It was a secret only the former bearers and the princesses knew!
Who names their kid something like Fizzlepop Berrytwist? That's weirder than Tempest Shadow. Tempest Shadow almost sounds normal.
She said she's Sunset like three times!
you had me at sonata dusk being a main character, instant like also tracking this.
didn't twilight tell her not to tell anyone, this seems like something that's going to bite her in the flank later in this new equestria later.
Are the other three figures more of the student six? That would be cool, I could picture Silverstream, Smolder, and maybe Yona helping Ocellus with this.
looks like next chapter they're going to have a good expository conversation, I'm intrigued to see what happened to Ocellus in the thirty year gap.
23 degrees Celsius is 73 degrees Fahrenheit.
Who's Ocellus?
I love how the police just immediately back down from one glare from Tempest. I mean. I would too!
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I hope Tempest has a plan, otherwise she's gonna get chewed out by at least Starlight. Looking forward to where this goes.
didn't expect the bad guy to not expose their evil plans to the heroes, has someone been studying up on the tropes.
Wait gladmane from that applejack and fluttershy episode, maybe he learned his lesson when he exposed his evil plan to the heroes from that time in los pegasus.
Great job Gladmane! You’ve got the heroes all tied up in a cellar! No way they’ll ever interfere with your plans now! Oh wait.... 3 of them are unicorns, at least 1 of which is a master in teleportation, and you’ve failed to suppress their magic, leaving Starlight to just go ‘pop’ and now they’re home free and have a clear target. Ya done goofed Gladmane, ya done goofed.
It's fine about the wait, and Selenite has a sweet ride. Nice two chapters, can't wait to see what happens at this talk show.
Wow you have the same thought about the theory how the would time works like how slow our world Compare to Equestria is fast time
Dang war war never change 😔
Great chapter, I love the twist with Luna and Twilight. I agree, Ocellus does make a very good fit for Generosity. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Luna and Twilight just appearing are accurate as hell lol. Like, what on earth could stop Luna and Twilight from tearing down corrupt government officials.
I'm gonna guess either Sandbar (since he lived in Ponyville) or maybe Smolder? Great chapter, can't wait to find out which one they fine next!
Time to kill some corrupt creatures. Yay!
Well...this was to be expected after a war. I mean look at the 20's and 30's.
That's all the author's note even needs to say. Gotta say, I enjoy the new chapter and them just suddenly bumping into Silverstream makes perfect sense! But I would have honestly pegged Sandy to be a marine biologist, mainly because of his cutie mark. A world traveler works for him too though, especially if he ends up doing it to try and spread peace and friendship to other lands.
So that means the young 6 are Involved in the story here huh cool I mean don't get me wrong to the other 4 they are awesome to have them team up I'm always intrested to those kids Because they're like the future of the elements of harmonies I don't know what's going to happen next but I am pretty intrested keep up the good work
River Cities... so like the River Federation? In EaW?
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Spread "peace & friendship" PLUS "the benefits of toilet paper" (& other signs of Civilization)
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I would definitely go to see this if it became a movie.
A rather interesting chapter, I liked your story about the Sirens' disappearance. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Interesting...
Another great chapter! Just who is this mysterious-apparent griffon-with a strange past? I for one can't wait to find out!
Plausibly, a disgruntled Griffon soldier, or somebody who lost a relative in the war
Probably a Changeling who didn’t reform
Hanging above me.
Looked around me.
Interesting start. There aren’t many stories like this, which is a shame as they offer lots of potential.
So we found A barrier ocellus And she's part of the protest wow And Tempest is getting much better with her magic despite her magic horn is broken