As the 5th anniversary of Scootaloo's parent's death nears, she slips into depression. But in the wake of her sadness, a certain pink pony is there to comfort her in her time of mourning.
This is my first attempt at writing anything not grimdark or random, so leave reviews, tips, correction, etc. Thanks and have a Happy Holidays.
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D'aw! It's so sad, yet so happy!
Umm... this story was on here before, why did you reupload this without changing a single thing?
Seriously, it's identical to when it was first on this site! It has the same problems it had before!
D'aw! It's so sad, yet so happy!
.83736 Nooo.... I changed a lot towards the middle and end.
Oh god don't tell me I dun goof'd...
Did you get the Celestmas title form my story? Just wonderin'
83747 No, I got it from random pony and christmas related things plus PRiSON saying Celestmas on Celestia Radio.
AAWWWWWMYGOD, so adorable!
(with no poof)
Pinkie Pie is always the person to do stuff like this.
But I always thought of Pinkamena as boring Pinkie, or
And yus, I know that Pinkie's real name is Pinkamena Diane Pie. It's a cute name.
I love it! :D Despite the grammar problems (only a few, I can still understand them), it's awesome!
83793 Could point them out, there are few things I obcess over and my grammar is one of them.
You should probably pay more attention to the actual show...
-Scootaloo seems out of character. She's very tomboyish. I feel like she's acting more like Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle here. Somehow I don't see Scootaloo as being interested in something like baking.
-We already know that ponies celebrate Hearth's Warming Eve. You could really switch out all the references to "Celestmas" with that, and it would make the same amount of sense.
good chap, btw am i the only one who sorta hopes we scootaloo relative in family appreciation day?
this has acually made me feel something that i havent felt in years.
empathy
86527
Mission accomplished.
This was absolutely amazing! You did wonderful. I felt that the characterization was spot on. This was really cute too. I love fanfictions like this.
101524 Thank you! I usually don't write cute/adorable like this. I'm a very dark writer, but would you like to see more like this? Because by all means I wouldn't care to try and take another shot at something like this.
HNNNNNNNG
Aside from grammar issues and the brevity of Scootaloo's flash back, it was cavity and diabetes inducingly sweet. Now if you'll excuse me I need to get some insulin and brush my teeth with Sensodyne.
im back and this time im not a guest
LOVE THE STORY! MAKES ME WANT TO CRY!
Read on Christmas Eve. Only found one problem... THERE IS NOT ENOUGH VEIWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
This is so good, it hits you right in the feels.