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Apple Bottoms


Pony got those Apple Bottoms jeans, jeans! Boots with the fur - with the fur!

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Being a princess looks like sunshine and rainbows from the outside; but for research-obsessed Twilight Sparkle, being a princess sounds scary, and those new wings aren't helping either!

So she does whatever any stressed bookworm would do, decides to seek advice from the best: successful rulers from the past! But she's not here for bookish research, oh no; she wants to see these rulers in action! Twilight decides to start off at the very beginning, with the first recognized ruler of Equestria: Queen Majesty. But once Queen Majesty catches her and forces the truth out of her, Twilight Sparkle will be dragged into a whirlwind adventure through time. She will have to face old foes, new foes, old magic, and the most powerful magic of all: friendship.

Written for the Imposing Soverigns III: SOUL of Equestria contest, using prompt Twilight Sparkle and Majesty/Bravery.

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Comments ( 14 )

That was absolutely wonderful I loved reading it and was a very cute story

Lol! Yeah a unicorn's horn is called an alicorn while Twilight is used to that being the name for ponies like Celestia.

A fantastic pan-generational crossover. (I do love the implication that they did mess up the timeline, but in the G5 region.) Great comparison of two very different rulers in pony history, along with the common ground they can still find and lessons they can teach one another. Though I'm not thrilled about Equestria Girls apparently not being a thing here. Still, thank you for this and best of luck in the judging.

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Thank you very much!! :heart:

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Exactly!! Majesty isn't used to it in that context, so they will probably continue having that argument for ... a long time. :rainbowlaugh:


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Wow, you read fast! Thank you so much for the kind comment, I'm glad you picked up on that little spoilered tidbit! :raritywink: Maybe Twilight Sparkle didn't want to hear what the Equestria Girls rulers had to say! Species-ist! :rainbowlaugh:

I very truly enjoyed this read!! I hope to see more works from you in the future!

This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You had me crying sad at the bit with the pictures, and then crying happy at Twilight's bit about the importance of kindness, then sniffling again at the end. Kudo's.

I want to add that one of the things I loved most about this is that it pays homage to the original generation while tying all the others together in a graceful way that respects them while still having a bit of fun with them. The moral at the end is well-done, too. It's meaningful without being preachy, plus it avoids the trap of making the villain too one-dimensional. There's a lot of good lessons in this, and they're just subtle enough it doesn't make it too ponderous under the weight of what it's trying to say. Given the fact we're heading into a new generation, it's nice seeing the old ones are still getting lots of love.

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Thank you so much!! I hope you enjoy what comes next! ^^

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Hello, hi there! Sorry for the long silence there - I saw your comments, and was so bowled over by how sweet and kind they were that I screencapped them to show to my friends, aww'd over how thoughtful they were, and then promptly got stymied on how to reply!

So, thank you, first of all!! Your quote "This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read." really hit me square in the chest, because I don't think I've ever had someone describe my stories that way! So that meant a lot to me, sincerely! And then you explain why you liked it, and what makes it one of the best in your mind, so that just - that's everything we want to hear, as writers!!

I love that you got a kick out of the older generations too! I also love the old gens, and for all their flaws, they still hold a valued place in my heart. So it's nice to meet someone who appreciates them too!

Anyway, thanks again for such a nice comment, it really means a lot to me! :heart:

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Perhaps Fan of Most Everything meant the fact Twilight had no idea what a human was?

Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed it.

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Ohhh, very good point! Well, I intended this story to land somewhere amorphously in the middle of the series, before she's very used to her wings and princess-ship - perhaps she simply hasn't left Equestria yet! :rainbowwild:


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Thank you very much for your kind words! :heart:

I haven't added a fic to my "Excellent" shelf in a long time, but this one certainly deserves it! What a great, multi-generational story! I loved the contrast between between Twilight and Majesty's personalities and strengths. I also loved the difference in magic styles! Great fic!

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Wow, high praise indeed! Thank you very much for your kind words, and for the illustrious spot on your Excellent shelf! I appreciate both very much! :heart:

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