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The Blue EM2


Glad to be here at last.

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Sugar Moonlight is jealous of Cloudpuff, for reasons best known to herself. However, her jealously brings to light a very real danger, one that will cause Maretime Bay to descend into chaos once it, and the efforts to contain it, are unleashed.

Written for the Generation 5 Bingo Contest.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 32 )
Comment posted by Sombcord Evilian deleted Nov 1st, 2021

Why isn't there a sci-fi tag?

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Not yet, at least. Tags added as needed.

A very interesting start. Excited to find out what's next!!

Liked, added to G5 folder, and tracked!

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Don't forget to hit the track button so you don't miss any updates,

Ooh, another awesome chapter!!

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I appreciate the support.

What is the cover art?

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It's from the tabletop game Battletech.

Oh my Celestia! Is this what I think it is! Is it a Sugar Moonlight Featured story?! Wow I think this is the first of its kind! Wait nope it is the first o its kind! You seriously don't know how happy I am to be finding a story with her in it. I have gotten quite attached to her while writing my own story featuring her and I figured it was the only one, but actually finding one makes me so happy, I can't even!:pinkiehappy:

Thank You so much for writing this! :heart:

This is going no where but my favorites!:rainbowkiss:
(Over-Dramatic? You Know It!:raritywink:)

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Thanks for reading! This was written for the G5 bingo contest, and she was one of my elements.

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Still love the fic and the usage of Moonlight!
And anytime buddy!:twilightsmile:

What Mechs do you like? I’m partial to the Highlander 732 and the Bargest. None of the players around here like quads. :applecry:

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Mad Cat MkII and Fafnirs are high on my list.

I see no reason for this to fail spectacularly. :ajsmug:

Suddenly, something collided with her muzzle, and she was knocked back into the house as the door slammed in front of her. "Ow!"

There goes her morning starting off good. :ajbemused:

"Sunny!" called the voice of Hitch, who ran over. "I'm so sorry. I keep the door on an automatic spring so that it closes after I enter. As Sheriff, I do need to set a good impression when it comes to security arrangements in the town."

:facehoof: Really Hitch, just really.

Sunny rolled to one side as the streetcar rattled past, the first (and only) in Maretime Bay's streetcar fleet. This small line ran back and forth, carrying passengers and goods about from one side of town to another. Whilst it had for a long time been powered by a rechargable battery, spare parts for this were running out and the charge was getting shorter and shorter. Luckily, the town council had recently approved the construction of a hydroelectric dam over a nearby waterfall, with electric generation equipment derived from pegasus technology. This meant they could be even more eco friendly than before and finally see off their reliance on fossil fuel power, with the CanterLogic factory being the first facility in town to promise to go fully eco clean.

Glad to see some good coming out of CL after the original stuff they made. :twilightblush:

Hitch took his turning to the police station and pushed his way through the door, getting through before the door slammed closed behind him. "Wait a second, what is this blue hedgehog doing here?"

I'm guessing that's supposed to be a sonic the hedgehog reference? :ajsmug:

"I'm posting it on Hoofnote to showcase how ponies are all getting along these days!"

Not the time or place to do it Pipp. :ajbemused:

"Remember that dad was transcribing out of Middle Ponish. That stuff was weird sometimes, and can be quite hard to understand. If my understanding is correct, this is none other than the Alicorn Amulet, which was once used by an ancient mage to try and defeat Twilight Sparkle, the last Princess of Imperial Equestria, albeit before she became princess. I have no idea how it survived, but we need to get out there and ensure that it is recovered, pronto!"

Just from Sugar told us I had a feeling it was the alicorn amulet! :raritydespair:

Having seen off the blue hedgehog (informing him that he would see him in Green Hills), Hitch turned his entire attention to his deputy, Sprout. Safe to say, this was not going to be pretty. "Well then, Sprout. Seems you made quite the mess whilst I was away; not a good record for a deputy sheriff. Do you have any idea of the charges that could be placed against you?"

Knew it, lol! :rainbowlaugh:

Zipp looked over. "So do Zephyr Heights. Maretime Bay and Zephyr Heights may be in different time zones, but it's still daytime at the same times."

Are time zones even a thing in Equestria? :applejackconfused:

Suddenly, Cloudpuff shot lasers from his eyes. An abrupt turn of his head dislodged some masonry from the lighthouse.

You were saying Sunny? :duck:

"And only a day after yesterday's demolition derby!" Pipp added. "What?"

Not the perfect time Pipp. :facehoof:

"That's kinda why we're here," Sprout continued. "These should give you enough firepower to see off Cloudzilla out there! I'll be running mission control as these machines need full, real time logistical support."

Lol, cloudzilla. :rainbowlaugh:

"Right?" asked Pipp, seeing Sunny staring off into space."

You don't need that " at the end of the sentence.

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More or less. Removing the toxic elements was a key cvhange.

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The alicorn amulet was one of my prompts. If any of the characters seem a bit weird or OOC, remember this was written not long after the movie came oit, when we still knew relatively little about post-Imperial Equestria.

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1. Make your Mark would imply that they aren't. Again, I reiterate this was written shortly after the movie came out.

2. Corrected.

"Does this machine have a phone charging port? Mine's getting a bit low," Pipp asked.

Not the time or place to worry about your phone Pipp. :ajbemused:

"Nearly!" Sunny replied, trying to cover up the fact she actually did not.

Not surprised there. :duck:

"It's a bit mean to call the missiles dumb!" Izzy retorted.

Concentrate Izzy! :twilightangry2:

Sure enough, all five mechs aimed for the skies, and put up several barrages of missiles. These flew over the gigantic flying pomeranian's head, preventing him from taking off for fear of being shot down. He barked at the mechs, the noise incredibly loud and causing the ground the shake.

to shake.*

"It's that or the entire town gets flattened by a gigantic flying dog," Zipp pointed out. "I say we do it."

It's worth a shot. :fluttershysad:

Cloudpuff eventually relented, and reached behind his neck. He succesfully disconnected the amulet, and passed it to Haven. Seconds later, there was another bright flash, and everypony either covered their eyes or adjusted the light filtering gear in their mech cockpits to protect them from the glare, specifically their eyes, which were rather vital for seeing what one was doing.

How was Cloudpuff able to take it off!?!? :pinkiegasp::applejackconfused:

Sunny laughed at Hitch's predicament. "Clearly my doors dislike you as much as your doors dislike mine!"

Lol :rainbowlaugh:

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