An explosive device is lodged into Sweetie Belle's ear... but why?
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Okay, let's see where this goes. Or rather, where Sweetie Belle goes.
I made a joke. Ha ha.
You, sir, have piqued my curiosity. I shall fave this and hope that it does not get shut down.
Critique-wise, I really have none. You stayed consistent, didn't commit any blatant grammar errors, and had okay descriptive text. Something to work on, perhaps, would be varying sentence structure more often, to make it less of simple "Subject verbs object" sentences.
Liking it so far!
This looks very interesting. I'll keep my eye on it.
I'm confused but I love it. Poor Sweetie, though.
HERE WE GO!
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hehe, sorry I couldn't resist.
Following for now, I'm curious as to what's going on.
~Have a good one
Just finished 'Cheerlis's Garden'..... Now this..... I like it.
Okay interesting, but what in the name of Luna's abacus is going on?,
An exploding hearing aide logged in Sweety bells ear!?!?
Who the hell is this guy, Muhammad.
1288632 is it sad I just NOW got that picture...
The suspense and mystery
It's literally killing me
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1411997 Celestia's brother? She doesn't have a brother in this story. Where did you see that? This is a different Alternate universe from "Statues".
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It would appear as if I have read this wile half asleep.... I mistook bother for brother
1413897 *sympathy pat* somepony sounds like he needs a nap.
1414062 NO..... Yes
1414215 sounds like somepony needs a vicodin? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
1414224 Really.... Really.....
*facehoofs and falls over sleeping*
I am now even more confused than before. Let us initiate the slow clap procedure.
*clap* *clap*
Huh, at first I thought no one could really help her otherwise the bomb would go off, but then it seems like anyone can help her, but just not for long? or maybe it's okay to help her so long as she goes where the voice is telling her to go? but then couldn't they all go with her?
I'm so confused right now haha. Loving it so far.
~Have a good one.
this is going either one of two ways that may involve @$&##*£€¥^+=%}{~><€£¥@&$)(?!',. Spoiler completed.
*squeeze*
Of the many possibilities running through my head, very few are ending well.
...oh celestia, why.... such evil in such short sentences...
wait.... Did Bon Bon just get slotted......
so shouldn't have read this chapter now..... 07:28 and about to go into little Chernobyl. And you have successfully made me feel shitty
1561360 ....
What in all my fuck.
1640293 ....*sigh* I know...I like dark stuff...
1640297 No, that just makes me laugh. It's not the dark that offputs me, it just seems absurd.
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I had no idea what you ment, but I eventually figured out it was spike
So... There parents are dead now? I guess burn juice and cereal were there last meal...
2257711 eep! thanks!
Is this story dead cuse there hasn't been an update in 3 and a half YEARS
?!!!
Seriously this is just getting interesting