1477151 I have all those on my iPad
Spell check no Twilight not that kinda spell
Grammar checker
And some other stuff

YAY that annoying pink bitch pony is dead
Poor Pinkie

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yea as you noticed the level of depravity goes up with the chapter, so ch 3 shall top ch 2.

I tend to be well...brutal

1480867 so who's next to die?
Send me a PM I love spoilers

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no..no spoilers silly ;3

But remember everything for end is nigh ties together and so the puzzle shall start to assemble..One must suffer endless pain and heartache before they can ascend to a higher form. (Never more reference)

reading never more is pretty much needed to get the idea of this transformation.
And then Lullaby read to understand why Pinkie knows of the price to be paid.

I will Probably have End is nigh (The mass fic) posted up soon. should I just post them all together for everypony? Im 90% sure I will have to make it have a mature rating.

1480959 I'm 10% sure you don't
Noooo but you need to put the mature rating on
I mean Pinkie and AJ forced to practically eat each other that pretty discusting

Yes, you will have to put mature because I still have no idea what I just read. But you created it into such a beautiful dark horrific story. I truly have no idea what I am saying but that you just use words so well to make it more then just a gore story.

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Why thanks
the stories have more depth than gore, the key to good horror is being able to remove said gore and have a story still.

Gore is allowable if it moves the tale along and on that note I need to up this rating and add the gore tag.

Another thing with gore to keep in mind is its not the actions but the visual that burns...cupcakes is best example for over descriptive blow by blow gore.

'ok shes getting cut up...shes in pain....standard....'

This is shock gore and only on the first read through does it elicit any responce.

I perfer not to depect the actual actions if I can, in Nightdreams and daymares all of that was depicted but not in full on insane detail as to leave some to the readers imagination.

as for the last scene in ch2 I carefully worded it to where as read you would paint the visual in your mind without mentioning any cleche terms such as ' and then the blood spurted from her open cavity, the life draining from her'

thats lame and corny even for me

I like to leave it to imagination, its our imaginations that bring horror into this world after all

is he Zalgo?

Is this cancelled? It's been 5 years since you updated and it's such a good story