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Hush now, quiet now, Its time to lay your sleepyhead..It's time to go to bed..

A broken home with muffled screams.
Fallen stars and shattered dreams.

EDIT:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT2pxC2mCAI&feature=youtu.be
the Lullaby from chap 2 for your listening pleasure.

If any other ponies make killer music/art or readings from this please post or message me so I may enjoy them as well ;D

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 34 )

This is a darker story so please read it all the way before judging there is a message and yes the end is broken up and appears to be missing elements, this is intentional and will be covered in the notes.

Very interesting, I suppose :rainbowdetermined2:

Very well done. Though I may be immune to ponyscary stuff now, I still read them for the thrill. But I still read them in broad daylight.

This story was very poetic, I enjoyed reading this very much. :pinkiehappy:

Wait just a second... the ending makes it sound like Pinkie died and was reborn is that what your saying? If so it is an interesting concept I applaud the originality!

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:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: No way somepony read it!!!!!!I feel quite honored!!! and thanks for saying my user name is cool

I loved it! This is something new, something not everyone are able to create! Well done!:pinkiehappy:

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eyup her life is perpetual as covered in chap 3 in the notes, the theory is in there and reasoning behind it.

Very.... poetic. Poetic... but good.

731759 Thankyou, I try to have all my fics contain some poetic elements.

I am glad you enjoyed it.

please if you find the story worthy of your read, please be kind enough to upvote. Thankyou

BR

Time to write my story with lots of:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Depression story time!! YAY!!
Man, I think I really gonna draw some stuff for this :3 and when I'm done you'll never see me again...coz I gonna need some happy stuff^^

EDIT²
You guys should listen to the score of Nightmare on Elm Street (2011) while reading this. It doubled the eerinesssssssssssss

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:pinkiehappy:
I feel honored, I look forward to the art goodness and oh yes Nightmare on elm street sets this off quite nicely.

Realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy nice work! :pinkiecrazy:

For some reason, this reminds me of Hypno's Lullaby. Don't look it up on you tube. Ever... Please?:fluttershysad:
btw I love this. It's so creepy.

738684 i sing that song to the kids i babysit when they go to bed:pinkiehappy:

I understand a bit more now. They better have Pinkie's sisters in season three!

Very creative and creepy. I love it! :pinkiecrazy:

Very creative and creepy. I love it! :pinkiecrazy:

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