Into the Rainbow Factory

by Ractrin

Epilogue: The War of Sun and Moon

Princess Cadence looked out from the top of her Crystal Castle, across the Crystal Empire and into the lands of Equestria. Smoke billowed and magical explosions could be heard cascading over the mountains. “Aunt Celestia….Aunt Luna…what have you done?” she whispered as a guard approached her.
“It is confirmed my princess.” Sherem stated as he knelt before her. “The princesses of Equestria are at war.” She looked at him softly, and then let out a sigh.
“Thank you, Sherem. You may return to your regular duties.”
“Yes ma’am.” he said as he stood and walked out of the room. Cadence walked over to a flower pot that sat next to her thrown and put a hoof on the picture of a very old Shining Armor.
“Guard!” she shouted. The nearest guard to her approached her and knelt.
“Yes your highness?” he said respectfully.
“Prepare my things, I’m going on a trip.” she ordered as she sat on her throne.
“But…your majesty…Equestria is not a safe place to be!” he stated with great concern.
“I’m not going to Equestria.” Her horn began to glow turquoise as she spoke. A beam shot out and created a portal in the middle of the room. On the other side of it could be seen a room much unlike anything on the pony world. “I’m going to get help.”

Comments

[Jake The Army Guy]

This fails because it follows the same logic as the original Rainbow Factory: every pegasus in the world is either an idiot, a psychopath, or plain retarded. And Celestia never asked ONCE IN A THOUSAND YEARS where all the failures went? And she let them... you know what? Never mind.

[Another_Dead_Account1109]

So it seems Princess Cadence is going for Raptor, may I suggest an actual army? I do not think Raptor can fight them on his own and an Army of Advanced Aliens would be able to keep the Crystal Empire safe.

[Ractrin]

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I actually was thinking of that myself just a few days ago. i am actually considering Raptor bringing more than just himself, but him and his people are way OP, but...i may have a balancing technique worked out already. everyone will just havta wait and see when i write the sequels.

[Spooky Moon]

3859089 YES THANK YOU BESIDES ONE I POSTED I CANT FIND ANY NEGATIVE COMMENTS ON THIS

[Spooky Moon]

From what I have read this story doesn't deserve any of its likes or fans its poorly written the epilogue were Celestia and Luna went to war we have no idea how it happend this story fucking sucks so much ass author I'd suggest a rewrite once again THIS STORY SUCKS

[Wolfie566]

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i was thinking that instead of just Raptor of course, this time his entire battle cruiser would come into play and help out with the “war” they are having