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RazedRainbow

Joined December 2011
935 followers

Fun must be always.

Stories (7)

  • The Mill
    Apple Bloom never asked for this

    2,739 words · 12,737 views · 1,385 likes · 24 dislikes
  • Third Time's a Charm
    After Rainbow Dash saves her life yet again, Rarity lets something out.
    33,081 words · 15,779 views · 1,457 likes · 33 dislikes
  • Not All Who Wander Are Lost
    Scootaloo embarks on a quest to bring her fallen idol back to the land of the living
    91,785 words · 8,336 views · 517 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Where All Roads Lead
    On this day, every year, Pinkie sits at the crossroads, and waits for her
    3,288 words · 6,364 views · 316 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Egghead Tales
    4,930 words · 5,575 views · 345 likes · 10 dislikes
  • And a Dark Wind Blows
    13,093 words · 4,438 views · 287 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Reconstruction Site
    30,672 words · 2,309 views · 343 likes · 21 dislikes

Blog Posts (147)

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In the heat of the moment, some ponies have a habit of letting things out. Sometimes they are minor things that most just shrug off and forget about in a matter of milliseconds. Sometimes they are things that, once revealed, shake the very foundation of their existence.

Rarity's latest revelation falls into the latter.

First Published
12th Sep 2012
Last Modified
29th Mar 2013

Comments ( 564 )

RazedRainbow
Story Approver
#1 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

What's this? A RazedRainbow fic without death and/or depression? Ladies and Gentlemen, Hell hath frozen over.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Nice. No clop please?:twilightsheepish:

#3 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Ps, i see what you did there with the title. :ajsmug:

RazedRainbow
Story Approver
#4 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1265085

Don't worry, this is going to stay safe for work. :twilightsmile:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

:flutterrage: yay

#6 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

This appears to be interesting.. One question, should I?:unsuresweetie:

#7 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Without warning, Sweetie Belle began to rotate her head

#8 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Nice start!

RazedRainbow
Story Approver
#9 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1265385

You... I like you :rainbowdetermined2:

#10 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Then Rainbow dies a slow, dramatic death in the hospital with Rarity racked with survivors guilt. There ya go, I finished your story. :rainbowlaugh:

Great fic so far! Good scenes and nice feelings throughout. Looking forward to moar.

#11 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

...

I've got Pinkie's smile right now....

And that my friend, is no lie.

....

Continue....

#12 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

nice job cant wait for the next Chapter:twilightsmile:

#13 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Eehee! Yay, Raridash! That was basically my reaction when I saw this. There really needs to be more of that ship - ever since reading Salvation I've really warmed up to it. This looks great so far. It only makes sense (in the shipping world, anyway :derpytongue2: )that Rarity would hold on to the memory of being gallantly rescued and subconsciously look a little differently at her savior afterward. Can't wait to see what happens next :raritywink::rainbowkiss:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1264700

Worth it.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

Wow, nice read so far. Can't wait for more. I always love the resolution of high-speed flight meets cliff-face stories, after all.

Oh, and the thing with Rainbow Dash and Rarity.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

Brilliant. I'd like to read more.

#17 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

Interesting. Lets see where this goes.

#18 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

Razed you've got me wanting to read a raridash fic. You must be the best writer ever.

#19 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

Wow. Your writing style is really good. The words flow very naturally, and there weren't any errors that were big enough to distract me from the plot.

Oh, and it's a good Raridash for a change. I mean, it's not that the shipping is bad, it's just that the stories about it aren't usually that good.

Definitely watching this one and you as well.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

More missing/repeated words than I'd like, but a good story so far, looking forward to the rest.

#21 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

HUZZAH! Bad time to pop a wingie, eh Rainbow? :raritywink:

#22 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

I really like the build-up to the kiss--the details from the dream, Rarity's discombobulation in the morning, how the dreams plays itself out in the waking world. I especially like that Rarity doesn't seem head over heels in love with Dash but just at the stage of having a bewildering attraction.

Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

#23 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1265465 There have been enough of those already, with every character.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 23h ago · · ·

Very excited! Lookin' good so far.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 23h ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: This is great!! Was that really 4k words? It was over in a flash, it was so good! I can not wait for more! :heart:

#26 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 22h ago · · ·

I like it! More please! :raritywink::rainbowkiss:

#27 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 22h ago · · ·

Dat cliffhangar...:pinkiegasp:

#28 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1264700

What, you mean one like this?

I could go for one that doesn't go this route, not that it was bad but a lighter one seems enjoyable. I will read now.

Warning the linked story is

#29 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 22h ago · · ·

Haven't read much fanfiction lately, and I decided to get back into it with this story. I'd up-voted and fav'd it by the end of the italicized text. :pinkiehappy:

You've got a great grasp on Rarity's character. Looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

#30 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 21h ago · · ·

One of the fake eyelashes was ripped away by her momentum. By the time it started to float through the air she was five hundred meters, her frightened scream a mere hum in the summer sky.

She was five hundred meters?  five hundred meters lower? away?   That was the only big problem I saw one small one was an extra "as"

However, Rarity was well-versed in the art, and was looking as dazzling in a matter of minutes.

Despite those this story is quite good so far, I'll be waiting for more.

Also you win the award for best use of Sweetie Belle magic lessons.  :unsuresweetie:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 21h ago · · ·

A RarityxRainbow ship fic? The most elusive of pairings! (ha, see what I did there?.....I"m sorry)

#32 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 21h ago · · ·

kk sounds good more please ;3

Cynewulf
Story Approver
#33 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1272610 Oh you

Great story, and not just because you have my rad name on the bottom Razed my man.

Excellent beginning, I await this with eagerness.

#34 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 19h ago · · ·

Well, in the words of the Engineer..."Damnit Damnit Damnit!!"

I haven't read fan fiction in a while (Not since my Rio phase >.>) so I intended to stay out of it when I became a brony. Knowing what most fan fan fiction is like. (From the above comments, it seems the more common "Then one of them died, angst, woe, sadness beyond repair" type of fan fiction is prevlant") Of course, once I ran out of episodes to watch, and watched one too many fan projects on youtube, I came to Equestria Daily to see if they had any fix for my Pony craving. And lo and behold, a fan fiction. I was hesitant, but I decided "Hey if it's horrible you can live your life knowing you tried finding good fan fic's.". And ofc, the fan fiction I find happens to be GOOD. And I might go so far as to say great. Now Im not blaming you for getting me back into fan fiction....But Im blaming you for getting me into fan fiction. Anyways, I found it excellent, as you did emulate Rarity very well, imo. Will be watching this (And I suppose more fan fics thanks to you.:twilightangry2:). So here's to more good fanfiction! :rainbowkiss:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 19h ago · · ·

Fun fact: After falling 8 kilometers, you will pass out before you hit the ground.

#36 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 18h ago · · ·

That story picture broke my dick in half.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 17h ago · · ·

So I guess I'm the only one who finds it weird that Rarity was about to die and thought about everyone except the person who physically and metaphorically gave his heart to her, has experienced this same peril with her, and is one of the few who would've taken her death extremely hard? [scans comments] Yep, looks like. :facehoof:

#38 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 16h ago · · ·

Love it:rainbowwild:

#39 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1273576 Sparity fics abound SBL. Sad but true sometimes unrequited love does not get considered by the unrequiter.

#40 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 14h ago · · ·

>>1273670 It's not that I'm a huge Sparity advocate, but when I read a Rarity romance and see Spike inevitable involvement poorly addressed or addressed not at all, I can't help but be bothered by it. We all care about these characters, so it's only natural to care about what's important to them, and Spike and Rarity are nothing if not important to one another. It would make sense for someone as generous and considerate as Rarity to acknowledge his adoration and think of him during such a critical moment, especially if she specifically recalls her second plummet. If their relationship isn't as intimate or has changed in this time frame, the author should probably let us know before the romance begins.

#41 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 13h ago · · 1 ·

>>1273860 There's a fic in the feature box that might interest you. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50892/Rolling-in-Beaches Its a Spike/seapony fic that seems to include Rarity being jealous.

#42 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 13h ago · · ·

Oh Sweetie. You sure are great at magic! :unsuresweetie:

#43 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1273871 Reading that one, too. :ajsmug: Added to my last reply to make it a bit clearer.

#44 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 12h ago · · ·

A little question: when were the two times that Rainbow is supposed to have saved Rarity before? Once at the Best Young Fliers Competition, but I can't think of the other. Help me out? :twistnerd:

RazedRainbow
Story Approver
#45 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1274118

Secret of My Excess

#46 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1274127 Ah yes. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

#47 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 11h ago · · ·

>>1265385

Warning: SWEETIE.EXE has suffered a critical exception error

#48 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 10h ago · · ·

A RariDash fic that's actually managed to both catch and keep my interest?:raritystarry:

I shall follow this developement with great interest.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 9h ago · · ·

Only a shame its incompleat. Would love more!

#50 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 9h ago · · ·

>>1264700 Are you sure there's no death? I mean that cliffhanger ending there could lead right in to it.

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