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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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"What even is this?" Twilight asked. "I don't think it's a dagger, or a knife. The blade is far too wide. And it isn't sharpened."

One mysterious object would unlock Cozy's past, and reveal long-lost truths.


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Are you ever going to write a story expanding on this?

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"Are you ever going to write a story expanding on this?"

But I only even published this story about five minutes ago! :twilightsmile:

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Now I'm worried about how many other budding supervillains are out there thanks to Starlight.

lWhile you're here, would you like to take a look at an impractically long necktie?

You missed an opportunity to make a Doctor Who reference with "impractically long scarf".

Cozy Glow smiled up at Starlight. "Hay, babe! Anypony told you today what a hot mare you are? I'd LOVE to show you a good time."

Ok, I did NOT expect that.
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:rainbowlaugh:

- A clever reinterpretation of her cutie mark and explanation for how she may have gone bad. :twilightsmile:
- I think the last third was the most effective part of the tale!

A faint, childish voice said. "Are you here to bring me more blocks? I'm all out!"

"She's out!" the first guard shouted. "Alert the castle! Cozy Glow has escaped!"

The childish voice said, "I'm not escaping! That would be bad, right? But I'm all out of blocks to build with. I've already taken apart half of this level and put it back together different, but I'm running out of building blocks!"

Ha!

Pretty good take, Cozy having the most stereotypical evil mother possible makes too much sense.

Bit of a loose thread earlier though, we never got to hear what Luna needed Spike to tell Twilight.

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that sound like a really Good idea

Comment posted by Mockingbirb deleted Feb 24th, 2022

Fantastic! I searched a lot of novels about Cozy Glow, but I didn't find this wonderful fic until I clicked on Kerfuffle tag for the first time! What a coincidence!:heart:

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