What made Cozy Glow evil?
That was the question that everypony would wonder whenever that peculiar name would be heard. Was it her cutie mark? Was it her parents? Was it both? Or was it something more?
A few nights before Twilight's coronation, the Princess of Friendship ponders those exact questions.
Then, there was a knock on her castle doors.
Note: Just a random idea I had. Just a heads up though, this is NOT canon with The Dawn of a New Mission, or ANY of its sequels, present or upcoming. This is a standalone fic, and NOTHING more!
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So when does she call the police on her colt friend's mistress?
I believe that amounts to grand theft
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Logically, yeah, but going through a gauntlet of trauma does tend to impede logical thought.
Interesting angle for Cozy's backstory. I'm intrigued about how it will go from here. My guess is that Cozy is some sort of vessel she made for all the dark thoughts Prudent had that was somehow given a life of her own, maybe? At least that's the vibe I'm getting from what I've seen right now.
However, just a suggestion, but it generally looks better when you use italics instead of ALL CAPS when you want to emphasise something. It's far less distracting and doesn't make it look like everyone's shouting at the top of their lungs all the time.
Cool story, looking forward to more!
This idea popped into my head while reading this (not for this story unless you want to use it, feel free), that one possible reason nothing can be found on Cozy Glow's past...is that she is from an alternate timeline or parallel universe. Perhaps one of the bad ones created by Starlight Glimmer's meddling, or from a different one altogether. They would almost certainly still exist. The multiverse is also a very big place. Infinite.
Ok look,if you don't feel like wanting to write it,Maybe you could look for someone that want to adopt the story?because if I see something in this,is a idea with potencial to become something really great & cool,so Better let a motivated & eager writer to make it that someone that not Right?
well at least is how I see it. I have not right to say what you should do,if you want to do this proyect you are talking about first and then try to continue this with more Motivation,I Approve,if you decide to give it to someone else,I also approve,as long as you remember there are people like me who are waiting for this everyday and wharever they see this being updated it truly animate their Day.
and about the chapter,it don't really Disappoint me per se,just make me kinda sad that with all the time its has been this not even 1k words,but is okay.