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Good chapter my man..... That was awesome
So when new update?
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Either by the end of the week or during the weekend itself I think. Sadly, school must come first!
More pls i hate cliffhangers
All I want to say is 20 is not a kid. What they're doing is wrong and I understand what he was trying to say by it but 20 is not a kid Young yes kid no.
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Now that I look at it, saying she's a kid in this particular area is a bit strange. But I do personally believe that until someone is about 25, they are a kid, matured, but still a kid. I meant it in the sense of someone older calling someone younger "kid" if you know what I mean, I imagined Dean had this mindset. I'll fix it though cause you are correct!
Wonderful story. Definitely underrated
Normally I would not indulge in power fantasies like this.
But then again, I can't contain the inner Doomguy in me to dispense sweet violent justice to enemies of Cute animals. (The daemons of Hell did kill Doomguy's rabbit, so this case feels familiar.)
NO MERCY GIVEN TO THE ELVES!
Just like Chief from Halo the title of the Demon has been given!
“THE DEMON!! QUICK KILL HIM BEFORE HE KILLS US!!”
Justice has been served and Dean won’t rest until all of the Elves are pushing up dasies or extinct all together.
Sorry I know this is on old story but this line pulled me out so I figured I would comment on it. "around one twenty to one sixty decibels of volume" That is such a huge range, for some context the average rifle today is 165db, a loud person talking is about 60db and a motorcycle is about 95db so a 40db diff is extreme, this also implies that the suppressor can bring it down to 40 from 160 and 120, instead of bring it down to 40-80db or 0-40db. I can suspend my disbelief for the super suppressor but future ammo would surely produce a consistent register when fired from future rifle. My suggestion is to pick a value and then state the new value suppressed not a wild range and then a fixed value.
Thank you for your time and thank you for the story its been great so far.
This chapter was 100x better with "The only thing they fear is you" blaring in the background