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So far I'm loving this story, can't wait for the next update! But until then keep up the good work, no one will mind if it takes a while for you to post I know school can be a bitch. It also might help if you made a schedule but that's just my opinion.
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Thanks! I appreciate the kind words. I'll see about making a schedule, but I don't get much time to write. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I'll try and get the next update out soon!
love the story
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Thanks!
Will there be something romantic between the human and Twilight in this story? Because the storyline leads to this (at least it seemed to me so), but story does not have the tag "Romance"
p.s. so far I really like the story, but with a romantic line (human X pony), it would be just gorgeous ;)
p.s.s. thx
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I'm going to be honest, I truly don't know. I've tossed that idea around in my head for a bit and decided I'll keep writing and see how it goes. I did intend to have some form of romance in the story so thanks for catching that, I'll put the tag up.
But as far as human x pony goes... we will just have to wait and see!
I changed the end of Origins Part 2 so that it lines up a bit better. Just a heads up!
So private, corporal, and any of the sergeants are their ranks, not call signs. Captain is an officer rank, putting him above the enlisted ranks.
And addressing someone is [rank] [last name]. He wouldn't be called Private Dean, it would be Private Forester. Then you can share your first name later.
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Thanks for the input! I actually don't know much about military tbh but I do try to research. I don't think I'll be able to change anything in the past chapters, but moving forward I can make sure to put his rank and last name instead when talking to side characters.
Were*... please, use were where where is used most of the time.
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Nice catch! I'll get that looked through tonight!
I already like Jenkins.