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So, she thinks it would have been smarter for him not to consider Dean an enemy when he had reasons to and none not to. I get she's angry about that and I am too, but to be fair to shining he made the smart decision with what little knowledge he had even if it happened to be misleading and Twilight acting like he was being stupid is wrong.
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Enjoying the story so far mate keep it up 😉
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it! And I will, next Chapter will likely come out tomorrow!
I actually forgot what the fanfic was about. The last eight chapters disappoint with their dryness, Dean, who was originally presented as a tough and unshakable warrior, began to lie down from any pony sneeze. And the ridiculous attempt to show the dark elf prince on the good side was clearly weak. Those four chapters about Dean's past were also boring and drawn out, after the first (where I realized that he loved his family) I just skipped them. I think I read a few more chapters, but if the story continues in a key where Dean fades into the background, this story where ponies figure only among themselves is not for me.
This is exclusively my opinion, which does not claim to be true. At the beginning fanfic seemed extremely promising to me. I don’t dislike this fanfic, but unfortunately I cannot like it either. I wish the author inspiration.
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I appreciate the feedback immensely as well as the kind words. Your opinion helps me improve. The only thing I can say at the moment is that I was looking to try and do some world building. The next few chapters I have planned follow closer to the ponies side of things before swinging back into the action with Dean at the center. Once again, I appreciate the feedback.
Amazing work you down here you had me hooked from the beginning
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Well thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it!
iron will sounds like a blacksmith name, so, could you say hes iron will smith?? :>
Everytime I read Iron Will I just read it as Torgue... TORGUE SINCERELY BELIEVES THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!
As Ron once said "shit shit shit and more shit" if you don't get the reference fuck off