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Dean, dun did a small verbal smackdown on Starlight. I like.
Something was very familiar.
Purple gold, maybe?
It kinda looks like anodized aluminium, but with deeper hue.
Different franchise, I know, but how funny would it be if the stuff was called Elirium?
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interesting Idea...
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We will have to see!
Dean & Twilight continue to be the most adorable pairing I've seen in a fanfiction so far. How she instantly leaped into his arms like they were separated lovers just upped the ante on how unbelievably cute their dynamic is.
The scratch behind the ears? Cute!
The belly rub? Adorable!
The 1st & 2nd tackle? Shoot me down with a love gun dawg!
Like come on! This description couldn't possibly get anymore cuter unless you decided to draw the scenario! Only then you would absolutely melt my heart away!
Dean just doesn't know how good he could have it with her in this new world...at least not yet.
Alright, enough gushing about the ENDGAME couple. Dean & Spike's brotherly relationship is just really great to see continue growing. The fact that Spike is quick to risk his life so soon for Dean after having just being reunited with his "sister" shows the amount of admiration & respect that he has given Dean & how much it goes the same for Dean. They just seem to click really well & I think it's just so great.
Interesting....very interesting choice of words here.
Btw Starlight has upgraded from bitch to C*** in a short amount of time. Really making me not like her...but maybe there's a reason why.
Oh & don't worry about the Midnight & Spitfire thing. I agree on it being out of nowhere. It's a good try on the romance setup outside of your lead characters but I personally think you should wait on it a little more before developing characters too fast. I'd say develop it to a certain point where the reader isn't thrown for a loop with it. Let it grow not at the same rate as your leads but just enough for it to not look forced.
Either way, good for Midnight if he does get some!
I really like your creativity. Have you ever thought about finding a person (well, or yourself) to create the Art of your book?
"Way to go" Instead of "wait a go"?
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I have a little bit, yes, though I would much prefer people draw something on their own time and show it if they chose to. I wouldn't actually use it without their explicit permission of course. Never had fan art before so I don't really know what to do or to expect.
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Nice catch!
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"Btw Starlight has upgraded from bitch to C*** in a short amount of time."
LMAO, not sure if that should be seen as an improvement with how I am intending to write her!
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Lol! It's most definitely an improvement, specially for when I get to see Dean kick her fucking teeth in for all the disrespect.
Talk shit?
Get hit!
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Lmao now that's a cool saying... might use it tomorrow on that one guy... just kidding, but we will have to wait and see...
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Well, I hope you enjoy my story!
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Thanks, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far!
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AYO?! WHAT?! SKINNED?! Ima need those Elves heads on a pike YESTERDAY! Bad enough these mothafuckas r**e with no worries but to inflict agonizing TORTURE?! AND TO THE RULERS OF THE LAND NO LESS!
I'm still tripping over Cadance being r***d to death & giving birth to children of sin thanks to Queen BugBitch's goons!
So many sickos in this story need some cruel & unusual pain inflicted on them! Time for some rightful get back from Dean the GOATED DEMON OF METAL & I hope to see Twilight rip into a bitch for all the pain she's suffered.
Dawg, I swear on everything if Fluttershy & the R word is even in the same sentence.....
I can't stand hearing about innocence being taken like that & knowing who & what Fluttershy is all about, it would just gut me like a knife to hear this outcome be the case. Learning about characters will hurt harder once something bad happens to that character.
I never even watched the show like that & I don't want nothing like this inflicted upon a character as timid & kind like that.
Already read a story that has involved r**e & almost teared up for the main character.
It's really fucked up. Such an immoral act. Probably even more so than murder itself.!
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Rape is the worst thing someone can inflict on another and those that do it deserve to suffer. Just so you guys don't think I'm a psycho or anything, i don't intend to go that far into those kinds of details but they will appear in later chapters. Just a warning.
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Thanks for the heads up. I'm no victim of the act but I am very emotional towards those who have suffered at the hands of it, both in real life or fictional. It's just something that just ain't right no matter how you slice it.
I also can't stand those who lie about such acts being inflicted upon them because that's just damaging on a whole nother level.
Sorry if the Spitfire and Midnight scene came out of nowhere, I was experimenting with the whole romance setting. Lemme know if it was good! Anyway, hope everyone is enjoying the story so far. Next up... training!
I think you did a great job of capturing a couple soldiers just trying to find a moment to be together during war time.....without getting caught.
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I agree