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Are dark elves the only type of elves that appear in this story?
Hehehehehehehehe, if only the Signifier knew...
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shhhhhh....
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As of right now, yes.There will be a twist later on however, but I cannot specify what happens.
YESSS a new chapter I love it I can't wait till "Glimmer" gets what's coming
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He does now.
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Shit.
I can't wait to see Dean put that insufferable changeling queen in her place. Justice is gonna roll down like thunder on her and her hive!
Don't lose hope Twilight, Dean knows the truth now & is on his way!
Twilight's section was just utterly depressing, she's broken, mentally & physically. I hope the changelings haven't done the unthinkable yet. Broodmare being the cause of Cadance's death is not something I wanna see for ol bookworm pony. She already escaped a gruesome r*** attempt beacuse of Dean. I'ma lose it if she actually gets that disgusting action done upon her this time. It'd be too much for me after Fluttershy & Derpy of all charcters were assaulted! HURRY UP DEAN!
As for "Glimmer" Bitch gotta go NOW! Cunning little shit this bug bitch is! I don't know who I hate more right now between her or the emperor. I just want them DEAD!
It's DEMON TIME! LET'S FUCK UP SOME SICKOS!
Oh yeah operation lavander is a go, I repeat operation Lavander is a go
Go "demon". Do not hesitate, Show no mercy!
Seems Dean was holding an Idiot Ball to force this plot point to go like it did.
He doesn't immediately recognize a Changeling when he sees one? Did he do ZERO intelligence gathering on creatures of the world? Bare minimum I would have thought he would have asked someone to give him a rundown of every species early on. Cover the basics he would want to know about.
What do they look like? What kind of magic do they have? What weapons do they use? How do they fight? Are they likely to be allies or enemies?
He should have done this before his first mission with a pony team.
The trauma of the reveal aside, he doesn't immediately think "We've been infiltrated by Changelings." he has a roundabout process where he thinks "The only allies of the Elves that are Quadrupeds are Changelings." He REALLY should already know the basics about them.
On a different point that's been bothering me for awhile. If I'm remembering right, Dean's wife and son died in a Orith attack 7 years ago, correct? So for 7 years this super soldier has repressed that memory and has been in complete denial of this reality. For 7 years his military sent a mentally unfit soldier into battle because "desperate times." Someone in his mental state was a danger to his entire unit and he should have been provided the psychiatric help necessary to get him through it and only then put him back in the field.
I'm pretty sure the Destroyer is messing with his mind too, but with this severe mental issue I have a really hard time telling what mental craziness is the Destroyer and what is just Dean's repressed mental issues.
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LordHayden, you bring up some very good points here. Some of what I put in this chapter was indeed to carry on the plot, however, I intended to answer some of your questions in the coming chapter. In regards to the Orith, I intend on talking about them more in the coming future as well. I will do my utter best to try and keep things as consistent as possible, and keep the characters of the story realistic and relatable. Some of these things may seem a but dumb, but I am no military buff when it comes to how a soldier is supposed to act. I am always researching while I write, but it seems I need to do a bit more. Thanks for your criticism.
Oh they are so going to die. Hans, Pass me the Flammenwerfer.
I feel like he would have the same war cry as jon bernthal's punisher, filled with rage and sorrow
this video kinda funny tho