Reread this chapter several times. I so so so love the stuff you come up with for pegasi!

A few things:

"Says here it matures late..."
"So did I!" begged Rainbow Dash.
"Whaddya mean 'did', sugarcube? You sure are soundin' like a big pony around about now..."

Are sounding? Not Aren't sounding?

"You can remember your mate. You can remember your foal, that you will love more than anything. You can remember me. Never again, Rainbow Dash!"

I'm not sure I entirely understand what she's saying by "you can remember x". Unless it's someting like "don't forget?"

Applejack smirked wryly. "That boy's on a mission. I'mma have to tell Twilight to sleep with a cork in her."

Rainbow Dash snickered, remembering their colorful history when they'd first discovered Trixie's magic bit. "Runs in the family. And just who's bagged ALL the elements of harmony, hmm?"

Applejack gulped. "No fair! That don't count, Pinkie here bagged ME not th' other way around! An' Fluttershy was in terrible shape that one day an' din't take no for an answer, and... um... well... uhh... I reckon maybe you're right?"

Fluttershy just ran out of fucks to give

I was lost without a new Applejinx fic to look forward to! Now life is better!

That being said, I have a question I'm not sure I'm supposed to ask yet- Are we supposed to assume that neither Pinkie nor AJ/Mac might be carrying recessive pegasus genes? I feel pretty safe to assume that with AJ and Mac, but I could totally see Pinkie having recessive genes. And it can't be that uncommon if both of the Cakes had them.

Or are we using a different canon for this? I'd always assumed that this was the biology that they just didn't talk about on the show, but I guess we could be someplace else entirely by now.

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Pinkie's possible, but I can't see AJ/Mac having any pegasus in them - the Apples as farmers double down on the earth-pony-ness, so I can't imagine there's usually much intermarrying of the other breeds into their lines.

So, Applejinx has gone two chapters without mares doin' naughty things to other mares. I haven't read the third chapter that was put up today yet, so looking forward to seeing if she loses all self-restraint and Chapter Three is a ridiculous fuckfest.

And just who's bagged ALL the elements of harmony, hmm?"

AJ swag.

I had no idea there was an apple type named Northern Spy. And even if I did, I don't think I would have guessed that in a million years. It is, however, absolutely, positively, awesome.

"Fuck them," said the gentle pegasus who'd never found a home in the sky, but had fallen in love with the ground instead. "Fuck them all, if they don't like it."

most. Epic. thing. evah..

Only problem with this genetics logic is that it makes Pound and Pumpkin even MORE unlikely...or at least Pound. Of course this now begs the question, is unicorn dominant over earth pony or is earth pony dominant over both?

"Fuck them," said the gentle pegasus who'd never found a home in the sky, but had fallen in love with the ground instead. "Fuck them all, if they don't like it."

Best line in a piece of fanfiction that I've ever read.

"Fuck 'em said the gental pegasus pony"
EPIC!! Dont piss Fluttershy off.

As much fun as I'm having reading this, I'm gonna stop here and read the prequel(s) so I have a better grasp of how this all happened.

"Fuck them all!" -- winning!

That moment when the kindest and gentlest of characters rises to the occasion on the crucible of controversy and brings forth a pillar of strength. Tis truly a thing of biblical proportions.

Epic brohoof! Northern SPY...Hmmm...Definitely like Fluttershy's name of Divinity a lot more. If it were anything but SPY...I think I'd like it a heck of a lot more. Too bad Dashie won't ever get to raise up a Pegasus foal to be just like her. Well, onward to the next great chapter!

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