Oh dear. KinkyUniTopia is in trouble almost before it's started!
Looks like I was right. Lyra's goin' alicorn-huntin'. Still a little disappointed we haven't seen the aftermath of RariCock vs. Lyra, though.
The Crusaders are gonna get in so much trouble. Though y'know, if they found out about it the logical bit to steal is Fluttershy's, because she and Pinkie don't use it. Unless Pinkie's REALLY taking one for the team now...
"I was scared you'd be mad at me- but I'm not scared any more. And I feel so much better. You're the most awesomest big sister ever, Rarity. I love you." A tear dripped down Rarity's cheek, and she drew Sweetie a little closer, protectively. "What else could I be?" she said.
Sure. 'Sister'.
In a small way I guess I feel proud that I realized before this chapter, heh, even though it was likely obvious t'everyone else
Ohhh, but thiiis! <3 eeee! Ohhhh! Jinxiiiieee~ <3 It was juuuust right. Oh! <3 Rariiitttyyy :D
Though she still coulda mentioned that Sweetie can get pegasi half-knocked up. Especially since they have a pair of pregnant pegasi presently (say it three times, fast!)
1506750 I feel exactly the same way about the Rarity thing. I was thinking, "I should call this! But everyone must see it, right?"
Lols... Applejinx. I'm sorry, but sometimes your dialogue is so confusing to read.
And is it just me, or is there a lot of moments in this chapter where a character is talking and then pauses and experiences some kind of "Holy-shit-revelation" and then goes off into some kind of tangent.
Well done with the sweetie belle scene, it was extremely in character for Rarity or any character of the show to be so supportive. Probably the nicest scene in the series so far, it just leaves you with a good feeling for sweetie's future. She shouldn't misunderstand anything with it explained so fully, and if she doesn't understand anything she knows rarity's there for her. I'm sure hi-jinx are still going to ensue, otherwise there wouldn't be a story, but I like how it was fully explained to her.
Twilight seems a little... off, though. Perhaps not thinking clearly?
1508602 Twilight is still very much out of her element, yet feels that she must be in control at all times. Yeah, not thinking clearly sums it up pretty well. And I think Rarity is confusing things for her even as she is helping Trixie. To say nothing of Rarity's own feelings. This Relationship is a bit of a powder keg. Twi really did have a moment there. Several moments really. I did find it odd that she was so, callous is the only word I can think of, regarding Trixie's experience with Luna. I get she was in dissertation mode, but I would have thought that enough of a sore spot for both of them... Meanwhile, Rarity gained +100 heartwarming points for doing a better job at caring for Sweetie Belle than their own parents. It's no wonder Sweetie idolizes her sister so much. I may have more to say later, this chapter had a lot for me to sort out in my head.
Nice one Trixie, for calling it EXACTLY as the situation stands. Well done there! Poor Twi, she tries so hard, but she's just plain outgunned... and Lyra, for the love of the moon, you're insatiable... maybe she has a secret death wish and doesn't realize it.
As for Rarity and Sweetie Belle? like Blue there said, she gets heartwarming points... that's ADORABLE in a way, and I think the two have gotten closer for it.
1507125 Haha! I know! I feel like such a smartie now :P This is my 'Rainbow Dash is pregnant', which everyone else got and I REFUUUUSED to believe.
1508883 None of this is 'canon', it just builds on what's established WITHIN canon, just like the ponies' sex lives. Even if this was 'true' (as in, the show creators subscribed to the belief that Sweetie was Rarity's daughter), it would never come up.
1510359 well obviously, just like the Apple family parents are never brought up, faust has said they are dead, but it'll never get brought up in the show.
I'm gonna need a while to process this. Writeup later maybe, but for now I'll just say this:
- In this chapter, Rarity accidentally Sweetie's first orgasm. And the big question is how many readers have we lost, because, really most folks don't want to read that.
Well, you've still got me. And I have to say as I read between the lines, the whole series has just taken a level in awesome.
1514142 Well... about "Rarity accidentally Sweetie's first orgasm." Even if Rarity gave Sweetie Bell a silk cloth for a purpose... it was a very wise thing to comfort her sister after. First I thought that this series was an "uneasy meal" for me and thought about not reading it further. But just one sentence "Love isn't sex, sex isn't property, jealousy isn't love- it's fear" in the first part (Trixie's Magic Bit) changed that, I decided - It was worth it. It is great that some wise, I mean really wise things, can be found here. And i think "Steady" chapter has a second great "wise thing" in it. Not to mention other wise thought and ways how to come out from some situations you can face in real life described in this series.
Even the wisest and most cunnin' folks have stuff get by them at times. Yes, it is Rarity who taught Applejack the wonders of silken saddle- because she is a seamstress and makes fabrics. She should be the FIRST to think of such side-effects, and this is why her shock was so great when she realized what she had done to Sweetie. However, by the end of the book you'll see that she had many other things to think about right then, and her mind was fixed upon 'reach out and grab THE FINEST cloth to sit Sweetie upon, the better to underscore your point that her body is a precious thing to nurture'. She's used to thinking of Sweetie not being responsive in that way, much less maddened and hair-triggered.
And NOW she's given Sweetie that very cloth for a purpose. She's no fool. She just insists Sweetie learn privacy and not turn to her directly to deal with such situations. She's successfully convinced Sweetie that what's happening isn't bad, and given her some coping mechanisms.
Well... my English is not perfect (it's a foreign language for me), and I think I was simply misunderstood because of this, besides I also don't catch what a "pointy-head critter" means . If you was offended by my comment (a far I can tell from two smiles "frownies" - ) I apologize.
What I tried to say about both situations with "accidentally silk cloth" and "on purpose silk cloth" from my point of view are good: If "accidentally" - that's one side of a coin and no further talking about it, but if "on purpose" - from my point of view Rarity's thoughts were about preventing psychological trauma and ensuring that Sweetie would not think she will be rejected because of such things. Just care and education, maybe with a little of overprotection and overcare (which were fueled by her basic care for her sister gone through a prism of her own past negative experience). Not a hidden incest or something similar. Just ensuring that no lasting damage from actions of other ponies on this whole situation would be applied on Sweetie's mind in sum (the shock on "discovering" what Rarity have done to Sweetie could be a part of her action on leading her sister to the right conclusions).
By the way it was a good thing to reveal for myself what is your point of view on this situation is, is is also a good thing that we have no disagreement on Rarity's intentions. Sorry - I simply hadn't found it as a single way of events... likely because of my own imagination and hidden wishes.
If something else in my comment was unsuitable for you - sorry again, I think I should cease my commenting on you stories from now on. I don't do it well.
Allow me to start by saying I love this series on more than one level. I thank you for the works you have posted here. That said, I wish to suggest two minor edits. Twilight says "Right hand", which is not an expression that would exist in Equestria. Though not necessary, I would reccomend changing that. Secondly, you may consider having Sweetie say "Dumb fabric" instead of "Stupid cloth". I bet that was the quote you were looking for
Ho, shit. I think I just realized where you're taking this. Seeing as this story is already completed, I feel safe in stating my thoughts. Sweetie Belle is Rarity's daughter, isn't she? It explains so much. The flashbacks, Rarity explaining about her past to Twilight, Trixie, and Lyra, the parents dumping her off on her "sister" for "the talk", Rarity's last line in the story, it all fits. The only mystery is the father, but I hope it isn't who I suspect it to be, though it would explain so much of the awkwardness.
Yeah, I think that "Third" time that Lyra was trying to get Rarity to talk about was when Rarity did that horn-spark-orgasm thing with a unicorn colt and then he came inside of her. Rarity is SO Sweetie's mom! Second time I've seen it in a story, and I LOVE it! And damn! I wish my parents gave me the talk that well when I was a kid. I swear that what she said was so much clearer than the BS my parents told me.
It is this chapter the one that convinced me to favorite this book.
Although uncommon (to say the least) this was such an intense touching event... Sweetie Belle is such a fortunate and astoundingly clever and mature little filly... um... young mare
Oh dear. KinkyUniTopia is in trouble almost before it's started!
Looks like I was right. Lyra's goin' alicorn-huntin'. Still a little disappointed we haven't seen the aftermath of RariCock vs. Lyra, though.
The Crusaders are gonna get in so much trouble. Though y'know, if they found out about it the logical bit to steal is Fluttershy's, because she and Pinkie don't use it. Unless Pinkie's REALLY taking one for the team now...
Man, Twilight has an encyclopedias worth of emotional issues right now.
Is Lyra simply looking to kill herself through sexual burnout, she seems to be trading up at every opportunity.
Sure. 'Sister'.
In a small way I guess I feel proud that I realized before this chapter, heh, even though it was likely obvious t'everyone else
Ohhh, but thiiis! <3 eeee! Ohhhh! Jinxiiiieee~ <3 It was juuuust right. Oh! <3 Rariiitttyyy :D
DAMN! SO GOOD! Little filly orgasm, awkward yet beautiful moment, little filly orgasm, it's so great.
So yeah, sex ed kinda like that.
Now I see why you were so quiet.
Though she still coulda mentioned that Sweetie can get pegasi half-knocked up. Especially since they have a pair of pregnant pegasi presently (say it three times, fast!)
1506750
I feel exactly the same way about the Rarity thing. I was thinking, "I should call this! But everyone must see it, right?"
Glad I'm not the only one.
Lols... Applejinx. I'm sorry, but sometimes your dialogue is so confusing to read.
And is it just me, or is there a lot of moments in this chapter where a character is talking
and then pauses and experiences some kind of "Holy-shit-revelation" and then goes
off into some kind of tangent.
Kinda want to get to back to AppleDash
Well done with the sweetie belle scene, it was extremely in character for Rarity or any character of the show to be so supportive. Probably the nicest scene in the series so far, it just leaves you with a good feeling for sweetie's future. She shouldn't misunderstand anything with it explained so fully, and if she doesn't understand anything she knows rarity's there for her. I'm sure hi-jinx are still going to ensue, otherwise there wouldn't be a story, but I like how it was fully explained to her.
Twilight seems a little... off, though. Perhaps not thinking clearly?
Rarity...what is wrong...?
1507125>>1506750 it's not canon in the show, but yes I do believe that is where this is going.
Dumb fabric!
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Twilight is still very much out of her element, yet feels that she must be in control at all times. Yeah, not thinking clearly sums it up pretty well. And I think Rarity is confusing things for her even as she is helping Trixie. To say nothing of Rarity's own feelings. This Relationship is a bit of a powder keg. Twi really did have a moment there. Several moments really. I did find it odd that she was so, callous is the only word I can think of, regarding Trixie's experience with Luna. I get she was in dissertation mode, but I would have thought that enough of a sore spot for both of them...
Meanwhile, Rarity gained +100 heartwarming points for doing a better job at caring for Sweetie Belle than their own parents. It's no wonder Sweetie idolizes her sister so much.
I may have more to say later, this chapter had a lot for me to sort out in my head.
Nice one Trixie, for calling it EXACTLY as the situation stands. Well done there! Poor Twi, she tries so hard, but she's just plain outgunned... and Lyra, for the love of the moon, you're insatiable... maybe she has a secret death wish and doesn't realize it.
As for Rarity and Sweetie Belle? like Blue there said, she gets heartwarming points... that's ADORABLE in a way, and I think the two have gotten closer for it.
1506914
Bro, you sound like you're just popping 'little filly orgasm' into a slogan maker:
s15.postimage.org/vjbki9md5/littlefillyorgasm.png
1507125
Haha! I know! I feel like such a smartie now :P This is my 'Rainbow Dash is pregnant', which everyone else got and I REFUUUUSED to believe.
1508883
None of this is 'canon', it just builds on what's established WITHIN canon, just like the ponies' sex lives. Even if this was 'true' (as in, the show creators subscribed to the belief that Sweetie was Rarity's daughter), it would never come up.
1510359 well obviously, just like the Apple family parents are never brought up, faust has said they are dead, but it'll never get brought up in the show.
i have the weirdest wingboner right now.
I just... wow.
I'm gonna need a while to process this. Writeup later maybe, but for now I'll just say this:
- In this chapter, Rarity accidentally Sweetie's first orgasm. And the big question is how many readers have we lost, because, really most folks don't want to read that.
Well, you've still got me. And I have to say as I read between the lines, the whole series has just taken a level in awesome.
1514142
Well... about "Rarity accidentally Sweetie's first orgasm." Even if Rarity gave Sweetie Bell a silk cloth for a purpose... it was a very wise thing to comfort her sister after.
First I thought that this series was an "uneasy meal" for me and thought about not reading it further. But just one sentence "Love isn't sex, sex isn't property, jealousy isn't love- it's fear" in the first part (Trixie's Magic Bit) changed that, I decided - It was worth it. It is great that some wise, I mean really wise things, can be found here. And i think "Steady" chapter has a second great "wise thing" in it. Not to mention other wise thought and ways how to come out from some situations you can face in real life described in this series.
1533876
Steady there, pointy-head critter...
Even the wisest and most cunnin' folks have stuff get by them at times. Yes, it is Rarity who taught Applejack the wonders of silken saddle- because she is a seamstress and makes fabrics. She should be the FIRST to think of such side-effects, and this is why her shock was so great when she realized what she had done to Sweetie. However, by the end of the book you'll see that she had many other things to think about right then, and her mind was fixed upon 'reach out and grab THE FINEST cloth to sit Sweetie upon, the better to underscore your point that her body is a precious thing to nurture'. She's used to thinking of Sweetie not being responsive in that way, much less maddened and hair-triggered.
And NOW she's given Sweetie that very cloth for a purpose. She's no fool. She just insists Sweetie learn privacy and not turn to her directly to deal with such situations. She's successfully convinced Sweetie that what's happening isn't bad, and given her some coping mechanisms.
1538050
Well... my English is not perfect (it's a foreign language for me), and I think I was simply misunderstood because of this, besides I also don't catch what a "pointy-head critter" means . If you was offended by my comment (a far I can tell from two
smiles"frownies" - ) I apologize.What I tried to say about both situations with "accidentally silk cloth" and "on purpose silk cloth" from my point of view are good: If "accidentally" - that's one side of a coin and no further talking about it, but if "on purpose" - from my point of view Rarity's thoughts were about preventing psychological trauma and ensuring that Sweetie would not think she will be rejected because of such things. Just care and education, maybe with a little of overprotection and overcare (which were fueled by her basic care for her sister gone through a prism of her own past negative experience). Not a hidden incest or something similar. Just ensuring that no lasting damage from actions of other ponies on this whole situation would be applied on Sweetie's mind in sum (the shock on "discovering" what Rarity have done to Sweetie could be a part of her action on leading her sister to the right conclusions).
By the way it was a good thing to reveal for myself what is your point of view on this situation is, is is also a good thing that we have no disagreement on Rarity's intentions. Sorry - I simply hadn't found it as a single way of events... likely because of my own imagination and hidden wishes.
If something else in my comment was unsuitable for you - sorry again, I think I should cease my commenting on you stories from now on. I don't do it well.
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Awww, don't be sad! I never got a notification and it's been three days before I noticed you said anything. Everything is OK
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Allow me to start by saying I love this series on more than one level. I thank you for the works you have posted here.
That said, I wish to suggest two minor edits. Twilight says "Right hand", which is not an expression that would exist in Equestria. Though not necessary, I would reccomend changing that. Secondly, you may consider having Sweetie say "Dumb fabric" instead of "Stupid cloth". I bet that was the quote you were looking for
Ho, shit. I think I just realized where you're taking this. Seeing as this story is already completed, I feel safe in stating my thoughts. Sweetie Belle is Rarity's daughter, isn't she? It explains so much. The flashbacks, Rarity explaining about her past to Twilight, Trixie, and Lyra, the parents dumping her off on her "sister" for "the talk", Rarity's last line in the story, it all fits. The only mystery is the father, but I hope it isn't who I suspect it to be, though it would explain so much of the awkwardness.
This was such a touching chapter!
And I agree and speculate the same as wabbit.
Rarity MUST be Sweetie Belle's mother!!!!
Yeah, I think that "Third" time that Lyra was trying to get Rarity to talk about was when Rarity did that horn-spark-orgasm thing with a unicorn colt and then he came inside of her. Rarity is SO Sweetie's mom! Second time I've seen it in a story, and I LOVE it! And damn! I wish my parents gave me the talk that well when I was a kid. I swear that what she said was so much clearer than the BS my parents told me.
2374023>>2511757>>3063857
Goddamn spoilers! But yeah, I didn't see that. But it is kinda cute :o
Btw, rarity's parents are assholes!
That was one of the most awkwardly touching moments I've ever read.
It is this chapter the one that convinced me to favorite this book.
Although uncommon (to say the least) this was such an intense touching event...
Sweetie Belle is such a fortunate and astoundingly clever and mature little filly... um... young mare
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I think you meant http://s16.photobucket.com/user/ultra1437/media/Memes/105206-reaction_faceSweetie_BelleThat_is_beautiful.png.html