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Oh, Black Adam. This... This is going to end poorly for them.
What is this a crossover with?
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Shazam, specifically the Black Adam stories.
The Monk
Should turn on voting, would definitely get a thumbs up from me. Look forward to your next update
Not a bad story. Though when i saw the main 6 tag and after reading the story i know he is going to get stoned most likely.
There's a reason the Norsemen made a custom to always extend hospitality if a stranger came calling to your home at night: Regardless of their appearance, you could not be sure just who was at your door, and good luck to you if you insulted one of the Æsir.
These ponies have just invite a wrath greater than anything they could have imagined. They'd best hope that he is not beyond the reach of Zehuti.
well, that is an interesting start, i like it. i cant wait to see where you take this.
i do like seeing where these RGRE stories go, there almost no stories where human reincarnates as pony while being RGRE(im not a fan of 'anon' stories, which makes up 99% of the RGRE stories). so ill definitely be watching this story closely
What does RGRE stand for
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Reverse Gender Roles .... Equestria I think
Nice chapter 👍
Interesting premise, I like the idea that this take place in early Equestria's history which is a welcome change. I would have liked to have preferred to have scene him adapt to his new reality, and his growth as a pony, or seeing how he fell in love founded his family more in detail. looking forward to see more of the story in the near future and what we will be his contribution to that era. Best of luck
also here is some work of mine if you are ever looking to commission a cover art for your story.
Huh. Interesting time to put the story. I'm curious where you're going with this.
Well this story definitely has my attention.
I suggest that you give Adam a strong hatred for nobles and for him to also greatly mistrust unicorns. Since I'm assuming that he's going to be taking a thousand year "nap" not long after his vengeance fueled rampage. I'm really curious to see if he'd attack any of the nobles living in Canterlot that even remotely remind him of the mare responsible for his family's murder.
Speaking of his family's murderer. Maybe you could have either Twilight or Rarity be a descendant of her. That would definitely complicate any of the main 6's interactions with Adam when he learns about that.
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Bruh he finds some mysterious substances which he smokes. And wakes up 1000 years later
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Hahahahahahahahaha, my god that was the first time i actually got that joke told to me.
i was kinda fooled by the artwork first, cause it looks like a unicorn there, but he is an earth pony in the story
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It kind of does, doesn't it? It's definitely an earth pony. Black Adam is stocky, and the stockiest male earth pony that isn't Snowflake was Big Mac, and it's his image I chose to put into silhouette for the cover art. It's just a trick of the background and the placement of the back ear, that makes it confusing. If we ever fiddle with it again, I'll lighten that area.
All my book covers and gifted book covers are the work of my spouse.
The Monk
I like this so far, you have gained my attention. Fingers crossed the trend continues, when might the next chapter be published?
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I'll try for bi-weekly or under on Friday. I work for a hospital, so I don't have much downtime. I do intend to finish this, as I have the ending already written.
The Monk
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That's no worry at all!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
-TW
You all say he'll get turned into stone but at the same time forget that Black Adam and in extension Shazam are both ageless when transformed. Theres a chance he stayed transformed for all those time with the high risking of aging into dust if he ever transform back in the present time
Looking forward to more
Lost was so weird.... I still haven't finished it
Might be missing something here
Holy shit!!! This is good!!!!
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Come again nigga?
10960034
10960286
Wow you are absolutely rude
To be honest, I never expected fic about Shazam!, so I'm quite intrigued! Besides some tiny typos I noticed, I feel this was a pretty good start. Good work!
Just some little typos to fix (in order, of course)!
Paragraph Five
Paragraph Eleven
Paragraph Twenty-Seven
Paragraph Thirty-Two
(Honestly, this one is optional, and a little too picky to point out in my opinion, but might as well tell you, no? I suggest either remove the space between the word "Equestria" and the ellipsis (the three dots), or replace the ellipsis with a comma. Or you can just leave it, heh.)
Paragraph Thirty-Six
Paragraph Forty-Five
Paragraph Fifty-Four
Paragraph Fifty-Five
Paragraph Sixty
Paragraph Seventy-Two & Seventy-Three
Paragraph Seventy-Seven
Paragraph Eighty-Two
Paragraph Ninety-Nine & One Hundred
Paragraph One Hundred Three, Five & Seven
Hope this helps!
Well damn… that got depressing quick.
loving what you got so far. i hope you got more planned than the pilot chapter :)
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Yep
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👍 am really excited for it
Ah your a man of culture as well I see
With his power he should be able to save his daughters. Enjoying the story so far.
Good, kick the hell out of those nobles! And if you’re in need of medival stuff I can provid knowledge for you.
Ok...I’m hooked....now reel me in with the next chapter~
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Chapters in Beta, release imminent.
Monk
so Adam's companion is a psychopathy in actuality, this will end well between them, can't wait to see what happens next.
Here hangs a tax collector: thief, arsonist, child murderer.
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They'll probably call Adam a psychopath too. He lost his entire family and killed some tax collectors
how the hell did Adam not realize Heart is lying when first he said his family sold him and then said they weren't even in equestria and then he said he was separated from his herd?
Ok so that murders are dead, what next?
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Eh.. not what I'd expected
I'm almost afraid to see just what sort of terrible things Adam's new companion will do before he learns about Hearts's true nature.
So Adam is actually a psychopath or he is just a run away. Either way new character.
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I think you mean Hearts Obsession. 😎
Time will tell.
I liked the hanging part gonna be like an anti hero or something?
Clearly, they had never heard the Tale of Pony Taxes.