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I'm very interested with this story!
I'm curious to see where this is going. Following it for now.
Just noticed this story, always love R63 Mane Six stuff, interesting so far, looking forward to see more of this. And if you are ever looking to commission a cover art let me know.
That was an interesting way to shapeshift. :)
she shatterd a contract? even if she knows what she is doing that isnt likely to go well for dusk as to my understanding things like magical contracts dont react well to being broken. This is celestia though to its not out of the question that the price that dusk has to pay doesnt concern her much or she simpely did not stick around long enought to see the result of her breaking contracts
I like the story so far, despite feeling like it's two stories mashed into one at the moment, through I think is can work still especially the clop stuff. For Easy I thing Celestia has good reason to be weary for him, being a Incubus, a demon dedicated to rape woman is never to be taken lightly, if it was a male succubus it might be less to be worried about. Still I am looking forward to see what sexual mischievousness he will be up to while he is in this Equestria and what he will do with the R63 Mane Six, will he randomly pair them with the stallions we know from the show, what sort of mind control or contract will he use on them. I would guess He already anticipated that he would get him powers blocked and might have a backup file key/power supply (for lack of a better work) to break what ever spells that could limit or restrain his powers.
Welp this Celestia is evil. If her plans for Twilight are anything close to the canon then she knows it's wrong to keep Dusk and his friends. It's also possible that her distrust of the demon is partially subconsciously if not consciously because she realizes it's more likely to question her bs. Fortunately this Dusk is not as trusting or naive which is a pleasant change (not to mention further along in the timeline).
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If not evil, she's at least very controlling, having those limiters on everyone potentially powerful enough to challenge her.
Saying that, what she said about the stallion versions of Twi and Fluttershy was pretty evil.
And once again, Riki graces us with an admirably unique story concept! I am enthralled with the characterization of our protagonist Easy Comfort, and eagerly await what humorous happenings are soon to occur. So often, prostitutes deal with self-loathing and hate what they do, treating it as a last resort. It is greatly compelling and refreshingly new to see a character whose whole life revolves around such things, and even takes pride in it!
I worry about Celestia, who seems to be trotting the line between over-protective and entirely mad with power, between her intention to keep the dimensional travelers in her world and this seal on her student's horns. I am, for now, unable to definitively decide which she resembles most, and as such I intently await more information.
It will be thrilling to see the conflict and contrast between said traveler's worldviews and that of canon Equestria, more so with Easy Comfort, whose native world comes entirely out of left field. He seems to be able to completely avoid whatever restrains they attempt to place on him thus far, rendering himself free to wreak havoc as he pleases, though he seems to not be that kind of demon.
My greatest anticipation so far by a wide margin is whether or not Dusk, Barb, and Butterscotch's home world will have any further impact on the story. Though, due to this narrative's tone being focused on comedy, I doubt we'll receive any juicy mourning for their lost friends or drama as they invade, demanding their safe return. It's a fun scene to imagine where Solaris comes soaring out a newly opened portal, dressed for war and forcibly requesting his subjects be returned to him, while Celestia meets him in the sky and they have a sun God(ess) showdown. Again, I doubt such things will occur, but a guy can hope, right?
In any case, this is a delightful narrative, and I can't wait to see what further conflict will arise due to these dimensional travelers. Whether it be Twilight finding out more ugly truths about her beloved princess from her counterpart, random horny mares getting showed what's what by a professional incubus, or just general RGRE things.
Hopefully this humble comment motivates you, if nothing else, for I look forward to more content.
Interesting twist that Death himself will come in play of the story, I am sure Grogar and him will play along fine, through I wonder why they didn't register Easy as the extra souls not to mention that he seems to carry a few extra around latched on to him. For the corporation of harvesting souls(how do you make profit with that) seeing that Death somehow was supplanted by other board member goons and seem to be trying to kick death out with another family crony to sounds pretty expected, I hope something will have to them to turn on each other or somehow get fired. I assumed that the souls of the R63 protagonist are separate from the cycle of reincarnation, through I wonder if they would actually register as copies or doubles of their TG counterparts souls?
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My apologies to everyone, The last line of the chapter somehow got dropped.
Fixed
An interesting look 'behind the veil' as it were. It seems even in death paperwork, scheming and red tape will follow one. A bit of a sobering thought in a way. Showing the afterlife, or at least this portion of it, as an office is a fun notion, and I enjoyed seeing it play out. At least Grey Colt will have the chance to 'reorganize' things now. And maybe get some of those succubi under control...
It seems that there are consequences for the gender flipped trio being here beyond influencing Equestria, and look forward to how things will develop. Perhaps some lives will be shortened, while others will extend beyond their expected span. Whatever happens, they will spread ripples outwards for certain, which will come back to Grey Colt's notice.
Welp, even though it's non cannon, your concept of death as a character is amazing. I'd have liked to see what he'd have done in the main story.
Would he have teamed up with the three lost souls to get back at the office workers? Or would he have been their end?
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The problem with god level characters in stories is that they tend to make things too easy, or the Author has to make things so dangerous to counter the GLC that it become unrealistic that the companions could keep up, let alone stay alive. So I try to keep overpowered characters on the side lines.
Im not sure if many people know this, but Death, The Grey Colt shows up in another story here. He is the main focus in the short story, Harbinger. It's not a very good story, but I'm still proud of it. I think the thing that kills it for people is the last line of the story. It ends on a pessimistic note, but thats who the main character is.
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Hmm, I'll take a look at that later on. I don't mind a bit of pessimism. Sometimes it's called for.
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You know, having a character that "IS" death, makes you look at HIE stories a little different. If someone goes from one universe to another one, what does that mean as far as their illegal alien status? Do they instantly become under the jurisdiction of the host universes Death? What happens if they don't? Really think about that. What happens if the HIE is outside the jurisdiction of the local Death? If they are still mortal, and yet, he can't collect them?
This doesn't necessarily have anything to do with this story, mind you. I honestly haven't decided to go down that rabbit hole. (But it is referenced.)
You know, A story I always wanted to write, but I know I just don't have the skill to pull it off. IS a HIE Displaced story. There are never any consequences to stoning the Displaced for a thousand years. Never. I want to see a Displaced story where the person gets displaced as Death and the consequences of what happens when people stop dying. The Elements hitting and the power of death being lock down into the stone. Just the panic that Celestia would experience as the hospitals begin filling up, and yet there is nothing she can do about it, but wait. That would be an awesome story. (Free idea for anyone who can successfully pull it off.)
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Now that's a grim dark setting. Imagine being rendered paralyzed, but unable to die, forever trapped in your own body. There'd be buildings filled with people waiting for the end. Not hospitals, practically morgues, but where the dead still live.
They'd probably try cremating you in the end. You can't feel if there's nothing left.
If you do decide to write that story, I'll definitely give it a read.
Thank you all.
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Nope.
Demons have bosses. Contracts are contracts. You agreed to pay the family.
Whenever you see a boss demon scene, play the music from "the godfather" in the background.
Monk
Nice to see an update on this. It's good to see some characterisation for Butterscotch in the story sense he barely was present in the story to beguine with, if at all. I find it interesting that he is a shy virgin, and this could be a good chance for him if that is really what he want, but I don't think he realises how this could be completely not what he expected or wanted The Best Night Ever could be a good reminded of it. Thought I think it's all more complex then what Easy make it out to be, and it's more about the mares asking him to stud for a foal more then actually want sex with a stallion, lesbian relation are probably more the norm there, I wonder if it's the reverse in his Equestria too mostly gay stallion couple and pay for a mare to bare a foal for them. I do like that Easy got called my Moon Dancer and the others looking forward what mischiefs he could do at CSfGU. I wonder if he can impregnate mares instantly.
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Come to think of if the descriptions of how bad stallion to mare radio is in this world, and the mentioned that there is a stud registry, then it must be a LOT worst for mares in Dusk Shine's world, sense the mare can't just say goodbye the next morning if they are inseminated and that she is seen as very valuable to all stallion, it makes it more likely that they are treated like broodmares even worst then the Hand Maidens books doing nothing else then used for breeding, or even worst breeding farms.... I am guessing that both worlds or the R63 world have at least a male impregnations spell, or something, or a futa dick spell for mares to allow the population to stay stable and not collapse; thought that must be something that worries Celestia and Solarus a lot in both worlds.
That is one of the reasons why I am not too big fan of drastic gender unevenness stories once you actually think about it a little further then the wish fulfilment aspect of it.
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And yet this is why I love RGRE. What would it mean? I have a story that I am considering writing where a street rat foal, selling his body and living in a cardboard box in an alleyway .... well, lets say Jane the ripper is also in that world.
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It largely if depend on how 'legal' prostitution is in this Equestria, I am assuming that this Celestia want stallions to keep a very large degree of freedom and right when it comes to sex, despite their very low number, and want them to spread their seed as much as possible in a natural manner. Maybe they can refuse parental claims on foals, or more negatively have no legal claims on foals. It largely depend on how pony cultures sees it historically and culturally because linked with the concern of lineage heritage concerns as an excuse. If you take judeo-Christian cultures it's pretty looked down upon and repressed while if you go into the native If you take a more native Americans route they heavily encouraged having sex with outsiders sense their children usually came out much stronger and healthier(also because if avoided inbreeding) and really didn't care who was the father and were much more matriarchal as a cultures. So Butterscotch could be prized as fresh blood compared to the local tock. It could also be that until he picked a partner or partners he is have move from area to area(or is financially incentivized) before he can settle in a town, and the mention of a registry is more to monitor the gene pool.
On the very dark path for the colt, I can referent to reality, I read up on that stuff on modern sex slavery, he would probably be forced to pay up a local pimp to not beat him up sell him out to the guard(Depending if prostitution is legal or not, I am assuming in this is the case hopefully), for be lured, snatched and forced, into a sex trafficking ring where he would be constantly be pressured into sex to rich client(not as glamorous as you might think) is some hotel or brawfful and pitted against other sex colts for pay and be in constant and can't escape. If it's 'legal' and there is a very low age of consent. It's not pretty dude, but admittedly can make for an interesting story which I would love to read.
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I happen to love Typist Gray's quote. I stared at this sentence for ever and I never not liked it.
"It turns out that prostitution was viewed as an honest profession. However, how ponies figured out this was their special talent when most ponies got their cutie marks in grade school was suspiciously glossed over whenever the subject came up." -Typist Gray
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I'm going to be tearing the story apart. There are chapters that should be between existing chapters. They are going to show up. I'm sorry as a writer here. I'm ...my life is a dumpster fire. I want to leave something for the future. I want to at least create a country like Dan_s Comments country of Multicursal. leave something for when i'm gone.
If you have never read Dans stories. do so. Start with drawn with the night.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/212048/drawn-with-the-night
Monk
(Twilight to Dumbledore) “In the short time I have known you, you are always so confident. Yet you are also so frequently wrong.” -tKepner