I like to play with the Butterfly Effect and see where it leads. To twist the Fates tapestry in places and watch events unfold, with popcorn...Wait that sounds familar.
Abducted at a young age, Twilight Sparkle’s life has changed beyond anything she could have possibly imagined…if she could only remember her past.
Follow the newly christened Sunset Shimmer as she rediscovers herself while working in the shadows for Equestria.
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Will the Equestria Girls universe be appearing in this story?
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Hi there, and thanks for your interest. I have no plans to include the Equestria Girls universe as part of this story. I hope this is not a problem and that you continue to enjoy this piece of mine.
I am left aghast at how good this was it really made me feel all sorts of emotions during the chapters i read.
If Celestia herself doesn't create an absolute mess in Predator if/when she learns the true nature of sunset I'm going to be severely disappointed in her.
still very interesting it seem like either the professors don't know about the docs shady dealings or are willingly ignorant
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What about the actual Sunset Shimmer?
An interesting story with protental. What was going on with the ears?
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Thank you for finding interest with my little piece here. The ears were planned to be a bit more of a distraction and hindrance (I also wanted to show sensitivity to loud, high pitch noises). But i couldn't fully get them to work without it feeling out of place. That and I was already more than happy with how long this chapter was.
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Hopefully I have done some justice with her alternate backstory in chapter 13 for you. She did end up in the Equestria Girls universe... Just in a little bit more of a heroic way.
Well crud.
Let's see where this goes.
Oh God, puns
I'm amazed at the the smoothness and utter punnyness of this line. Smart and perfect.
1.19 mornig Regards
You are awesome writer
Loving this story so far, and it definitely needs more attention. Eager to see more, and I hope more people find this story. I know I’m certainly glad that I stumbled upon this gem...
On another note, after binging this story I find it interesting that Twilight’s masters think her unsuitable in the role as an offensive agent due to being so mild mannered. Considering Twilight literally genocided an entire den of Diamond Dogs with efficiency and professionalism, she might be better at offensive operations than they think.
Well. For the "offense" portion of "offensive operations" at least.
Sharply
I like this
To bad torcher is highly ineffective to gane truthful and accurate information as the victim will say anything they believe will make you stop it. The main reason the confessions from the inquisition was always 100%.
Will there be any ascension to the alicorn going on here?
Love your AU story and world. Quick question; were the first 2 chapters set-up and to be ignored now, or are we going to see what's up with psycho-doc and the brainwashing and how Tempest and PREDATOR tie together? That seems like a REALLY big plot hole to just leave lying around
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Thanks for sharing your story!
I wonder if Celestia will tell then or atleast cadance about Shimmers intervention
I seriously don't know how this has just over 400 views. It should have thousands more
This is a very great story, I like it.
when will the sequel be?
yay the sequel is out.😀
This is great btw, just wanted you to know.
Pretty good.
I can honestly say I never expected this to come back. But I'm glad it did. Hopefully we can get some resolution for everything. I've been wondering if she'll ever get any semblance of memory back.
Welcome back, and I hope to see this continued.
It is nice to see that a new chapter has been added to this great story.
Can't wait to for the next chapter.
Hope to read more, great story so far.
Hmm. The threads are coming together.
It seems we have been blessed with a new chapter today.
And a good one at that!
Very good
Great story. In my top 5. Definitely added to read list.
Yay new chapter!
You tease! Thanks for the chapter, keep up the good work!