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Godslittleprincess


I think Twilight's best pony because I relate to her the best.

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A strange phenomenon has happened in Westview, New Jersey. The whole town and the people in it have seemingly vanished, and anyone with a personal connection to it or its inhabitants seem to have forgotten that it ever existed. Even stranger, an unusual broadcast signal has been coming from inside, revealing what looks like a 50s sitcom world, and at the center of this world are two Avengers, one of whom is supposed to be dead. It's up to Captain Twilight Sparkle of SWORD, Agent Flash Sentry of the FBI, and astrophysicist Dr. Moon Dancer to learn the truth and help all involved. Will they succeed? Inspired by WandaVision.

Written for FlashLight Week 2021 Day 7.

Prompt: Rewrite

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

This looks like a fun story. WandaVision was fun, and just swapping the MCU characters with the EG characters is always a fun little idea, even the ones that don't appear physically and are just mentioned.

So sad about Smolder, just like Sparky. I have a feeling I know who will be Agatha though, if my hunch from "Shutterbug" is correct.

“She was already pretty powerful to begin with,” pointed out Twilight. “She was the only one who came close to taking down Tirek.”

“You could argue Captain Marvel came pretty close,” Flash countered. “Didn’t she also get her powers from an Infinity Stone?”

Twilight rolled her eyes as she redirected the conversation back to Sunset, “We are not talking about her. Let’s just keep our focus on Sunset, okay?”

That was a scene I really enjoyed from the original. It felt like how fans of the comics and movies sit down and discuss which character they think is stronger.

These casts are all perfect! Oh, and I see Shutterbug is Agnes, huh? Think I know where that's going :raritywink:
Never thought of Micro Chips for Vision tbh, but it actually works quite well! And the SunChips crackship, yeah, I can kinda see it :rainbowlaugh: Overall, this is a nice EqG interpretation of WandaVision!

“Dr. Swaddle,” Twilight replied, recognizing the woman. “Have you seen Cadance and the rest of my family? I must have fallen asleep while we were waiting for the baby to come back from the nursery.”

When I read this I was like "Oh good, that means Celestia didn't die of cancer here, yay!" But then a few paragraphs later, and... ouch :')

Twilight looked out the window and saw Shutterbug hovering midair and holding Sunset’s daughters by two energy leashes. Sunset stood across from them with a look of both horror and anger on her face. Then, to Twilight’s utter disbelief, Shutterbug’s eyes glowed green again, and her entire person was consumed in green flames. When the flames dissipated, Shutterbug’s appearance changed. Her skin became an ashy grey, and her hair became green and stringy.

“Let go of my daughters, Chrysalis,” Sunset demanded.

This was a nice fun story. Just a fun little re-cast with a little Flashlight thrown in.

With her agents disarmed and her entire clip unloaded, Cinch realized how badly she was losing this fight. Her only chance of winning was if Project Hacker managed to destroy Sunset’s Micro Chips. That chance blew away in the wind when a white Micro Chips-shaped blur burst from the town hall’s roof and flew off to who-knows-where. Cinch growled in frustration before returning to her vehicle and ordering the driver to make a getaway, but before the driver could even turn on the ignition, a funnel cake truck slammed into Cinch’s car and pinned it to a nearby building.

“Whooo!” Moon Dancer cheered from the truck’s driver’s seat. “I hope you like prison, you old witch!”

If only Cinch got such a fate in canon.

I like how we're really focusing on the Hex Trio for this story, yet still getting a good grasp on what's going on inside the Hex. And I just noticed how you casted Crystal Prep students like Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare for the important SWORD Agents, since Cinch is the director, that was a nice touch :raritywink:
Also, I think I already know who you casted as Fietro, but I'll keep reading to see if I'm right. :rainbowkiss:

And RIP, Smolder :fluttercry:

“You want to know what happened that made me less by-the-book?” Flash began, addressing Twilight. “The Blip happened. I lost my brother and my aunt to the Blip, leaving me to take care of my grandmother. My brother’s best friend also lost his wife. She blipped out right in his arms on their wedding day, and he just had a hard time recovering. With my brother also gone, someone else needed to step in and give the guy emotional support.”

Oh, that's a lot of losses for my boy :fluttercry: I love how you included this dialogue, not only does it flesh out Flash, but also gives him something to relate to both Twilight and Sunset, and I always appreciate some inclusion (even if it's just a semi-indirect mention) of the characters from your universe.
Also, am I correct to assume that the brother's best friend's wife is Sweetie Belle? Since Button Mash and First Base are besties in your fics?

Yup, I knew I had guessed "Shutterbug" and "Rainbow Dash's" true identities. I still think Neighsay works fine. Not perfect, but good enough.

Awwww, I really loved this story! I also don't ship Monica and Jimmy, but since you casted Twilight and Flash for the roles, I like how you set them up in here, and having Flash's reassuring words be the last push Twi needed to get through the Hex was a sweet touch :twilightsmile:
Also, THANK YOUUUUUUU for having the Hex Trio share one last scene together AND have them hugging Sunset! That's really what I would've wanted for the actual WandaVision finale. Just a simple little scene with those four together. But oh well. :applejackunsure:

Fimfiction.net presents
A story by Godslittleprincess
Rebbeca Shoichet
James Kirk
Tara Strong
Vincent Tong
Kazumi Evans
Ashleigh Ball
Iris Quinn
and Kathleen Barr

Who's been messing up everything?
It's been Chrysallis all along!
Who's been pulling every evil string?
It's been Chrysallis all along!
She's insidious! (ha-ha!)
So perfidious!
That you haven't even noticed
And the pity is (the pity is)
Pity, pity, pity, pity
It's too late to fix anything
Now that everything has gone wrong
Thanks to Chrysallis (ha!)
Naughty Chrysallis
It's been Chrysallis all along!
And I killed Smolder too!
Ha Ha Ha Ha!

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