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Godslittleprincess


I think Twilight's best pony because I relate to her the best.

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This story is a sequel to Heaven’s Not Too Far Away


You can find it in the warm embrace of your family
Or calling up a long lost friend
You can even find it in the eyes of stranger
When you reach out a helping hand

---Matthew West, "The Heart of Christmas"

Live while you can, cherish the moment
The ones that you love, make sure they know it

---Matthew West, "The Heart of Christmas"

It's Flash's first Christmas without his mother, and if that wasn't bad enough, his mother had passed away a little over a week ago. Will Christmas still be a time of love and joy for him, or will it just be a cold, painful reminder of all the ways the ways that life can be cruelly unfair?

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Bravo ive got to say you did good so im setting off the fireworks.

First "Heaven's Not To Far Away" came to my list of favorites, and then "The Flashlight Biomonthly Challenges" made it into favorite list and then after that fimfic "The Trouble with Double" came straight to my favorite list, and now "The Heart of Christmas". So to sum up that's 4 fimfics in a row that captured
my heart entirely. Godslittleprinces IN MY EYES YOUR ABSOLUTELY AMAZING WRITER!!!!!!!

Flash started playing a few chords on his guitar and then began to sing

if you have Flash sing/play Silent Night, I am making a copyright cliam,

“Snow is falling Christmas Eve/Lights are coming on up and down the street

you're lucky, for now
Overall sweet, but d@## Chrysalis is such a Lady Tramine,:twilightoops: I am surprised you casted her at all, now Thorax and Pharynx as good-cop bad-cop I'd get
So can we expect Pharynx, Ocelllus and others in this series... okay too much. Can't wait for the next part of this series

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I've got ideas, but I'm not sure if I'll ever get a chance to write them down.

Pretty good story. I like how Flash helped all the orphans. Too bad Bee had a bad attitude the whole time, and Chrysalis is borderline abusive to all those kids. I hope things get better for them.

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Just jot them down for now.

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Two reasons for that: 1. I based her off of Chloe from Miraculous. 2. She has a pretty bad backstory that I may or may not elaborate on in the future. 🤷

Nice story. Very cute, but I fear you may be turning Flash into a gary stu. Just be careful, show a few of his flaws.

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I'm trying, but the flaws I have in mind for him are kind of subtle. :fluttershyouch: I actually am working on something that deals with one of his flaws, but I can't promise that you'll be satisfied by it. :applejackunsure: Besides, it's a sappy Christmas story. Not exactly the kind of story that spends a lot of time exploring character flaws.

After driving for about fifteen minutes, Flash pulled up into the parking lot of a house-shaped building. The building reminded Twilight of her own house, except that her house didn’t look like it was made of concrete and cheap wood. In front the house was a concrete sign that read “Chrysalis’s Home for Children.”

I'm now worried for the children.

Soon after, the teens heard more footsteps coming towards the door, and the door was opened by a man in his early- to mid-20s. The man had chartreuse green skin and medium-length slicked back orange hair. He was wearing bright yellow cleaning gloves and held a spray bottle of cleaner in one hand.

THORAX! This fanfic just got 20% cooler.

Base stopped laughing and smirked at Flash brazenly, “You mad, Bro?”

Really?
All in all this is a great Christmas themed story. Thank you.

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Yes, really. I don't know why, but I kept picturing First Base and Button Mash as BFF meme-lords. :applejackunsure:

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Strangely enough, I can imagine that too.

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