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Melody Song


A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.

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The letter that Pharynx wrote, which he didn't mean for anyone to see. But now he's seen; now they found it. And they're going to read it. And there just might be someone else who has something to say about it.

Because you can't take us all down. Pride voices will not be silenced. Written for the Pride and Positivity 2021 Event. Help out by donating to one of the charities they're contributing to this year!

-Transgender Law Center
-Palestine Children's Relief Fund
-Sewa International (An Indian charity collecting funds for COVID relief)


Cover art belongs to CitreneSkys

(Marked with suicide for mentions of self-harm and contemplation of suicide.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 33 )

This was so freaking sweet. I felt myself tear up a bit while reading this. The emotions here were so on point. Great job!
:)

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Aww, thanks! There's one more chapter I'm going to publish tomorrow, stay tuned!


10863931
As you should.

Let me guess, the haters are people who have hards on hemaha hards on for hating the transgender community

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The brony fandom seems to have an issue with transphobia and if often manifests itsself as stories about trans characters getting vote bombed on here.

10864707
Cool

There's actually one more chapter before it's actually completed...

Wait, so, this is Pharynx mlp and Pharynx eqg? I guess?

Now I wanna hug both Pharynxes... Pharynges? :applejackconfused: ...whatever

And why can't we upvote this twice? At least to compensate for all those hatevotes, damn them to Tartarus?

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Yes, hugs to both the Pharynxes...es...uh, just hugs for all!

And yeah, I really wish we could upvote more than once, a lot of stories deserve an upvote for every chapter...unfortunately, we'll just have to live with it

This was so nice and felt so natural to read, like it was just another person sharing their experience through a letter.
The line: "You’re perfect, Pharynx. I know that because I’m perfect too," made me tear up a little bit with happiness. This was a great story!
:)

At first I was like, “Pharynx is writing a letter to Pharynx? Was that an error?”

Then I realized it was EG!Pharynx writing to Changeling!Pharynx. Or is it the other way around? I dunno.

This was a lovely story. Thank you for it, and fuck the haters. Happy Pride Month!

I can’t believe I almost let the dislikes keep me away from this. I thought maybe it wasn’t written legibly, or it was paced terribly, or maybe rambling? Some sort of actual issue, I assumed. But no, I found a quality story that’s very sweet and heartfelt. A very lovely little read, and I’m so glad I decided to at least check the comments before judging the story. Great job on this!

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Thank you very much! I understand how dislikes might drive some people away from very good stories, and I admit I've fallen for it myself a couple times. But I'm very glad you decided to give this a chance, and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you

I first came around I was tough and hard and, as some of you have called me, a tsundere

:rainbowlaugh::twilightsheepish::trollestia:

being reformed changed me, and I’m still not entirely sure how.

It's the power of love friendship fanfiction

Don’t get me wrong, I’m still an utterly depressed mess

No doctor with a diagnosis and treatment means it's not a depression, it's an angst.

when I’m too depressed to move from my bed.

Literally the opposite from canon Pharynx.

lying on the bathroom floor with cut hooves

Em.. You had a tonn of holes in your hooves since foalhood?

Honestly, it was nice to know that I wouldn’t be one of the stories that we always hear about from the ponies.

Seriously? :ajbemused::raritydespair:

Pronouns He/Them

A touching letter to one's family just won't be complete without a user manual on pronouns.

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...Sorry you didn't enjoy it

The ending was meant to be telling himself that he has asserted his pronouns, since it's what he never intended to show the others

Urgh... This story certainly tries it's best to be sweet and fluffy. The problem is: it's tries way to hard. :applejackunsure:

My name is Pharynx Ray Elytron, pronouns he/him, sexuality: Bi.

No touching letter to yourself from a parallel dimension is complete without an instruction on pronouns.

can you tell I’m not good at this?

It's 'can't you tell'. Also, yes, Pharynx, we can.

Ugh, just writing it makes me gag…

You're not the only one. There are many ways to convey the same message without making your reader cringe.

Sunset told me you mostly stick to male pronouns..

My Little Pony: pronouns are magic!

Sunset warned me not to “go valedictorian”

All praise our Lady and Saviour, Sunset Shimmer! :yay:

she’s not Chrysalis, it’s a long story

That's sounds interesting, actually. :rainbowderp:

my Aunt Chrysalis

Wait... What was the point of human Pharynx having a different mother, again? :applejackconfused:

You’re perfect, Pharynx. I know that because I’m perfect too

Modesty is overrated, anyway. :trixieshiftleft:

someone who has an unbiased and out-of-context opinion

Sorry, this is Golden. :rainbowlaugh: If you want an unbiased and out-of-context opinion, just ask yourself!

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With everypony in the hive referring to Pharynx as 'he'... What's the point?

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He knows it in his heart, that's the point you hater!

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No, thank you. It was an interesting experience.

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Sorry if I hurt your feelings, it wasn't my intention.

I just think that a negative reaction is better than dead silence. I enjoyed your story, but for all the wrong reasons.

Still, it was more enjoyable than a few others I finished yesterday, so there is that.

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Well, I appreciate your honesty, but I was raised with the saying "if you don't have anything nice to say, then don't say anything at all"

A downvote would have told me all I needed to know, you did really hurt my feelings. Some of the parts you laughed at were my attempts to convey a deeper message to the reader, they weren't meant to be there as a joke

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