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yeah, I thought of how much that happened to me and I just had to put it in
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I'm glad you do. This is uncharted territory for me so I hope I am keeping to the characters personality well enough.
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Too friendly? He's not going to be dancing around and singing Kumbaya if that's what you mean
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Indenting on the way. As for his armor and weapons, you'll be finding out next chapter.
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More is on the way!
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I am honored that you like my story despite not knowing the world of Dark Souls. If you enjoy a challenging game and have time to spare, you should look into it. If not and you feel lost at some points, try http://darksoulswiki.wikispaces.com/ . Its about as close as you can get to understanding the game without having to play it. Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

you cant kill the dark lord he has been through things that would kill well anything else

Hmmm, interesting... However I hope the next update comes soon, lest I lose interest and have to reread the story when it does.
This story has a lot of potential.

I am pretty sure everyone will think he captured Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom

i await more

How would the dark wood ring work in a more realistic setting? I suppose it would just be decorative, I play a lot of dark souls and this thought just popped into my head. Also, a little information on what the guy is wearing would help others to understand, as of this moment all we know about how the guy looks is that he is wearing heavy armor, has a sword, and has a shield, it makes him rather vague and bland as a character. Other than that, I like it.

Never actually played the game myself, but I've seen other play it. Pretty good so far.

Why does Chicken have to be a little shit?

Could use more character description. It's kinda hard to determine and depict certain scenes without a description of the main character.
Anyways, good job!
I give this 5/5 Sunlight Medals.

So far, so good, keep it up!

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