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Silas Grimm


Fairly new to writing fan fiction. Not much else I care to share right now.

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JBL

Finally it's here! :pinkiehappy: And you didn't even tell me! :fluttershyouch:

I think this story might warrant a Dark tag as well.

2813361 Fair point. Sorry, I actually wasn't expecting to do this today but I found myself with some free time and there it is.

IT'S HERE!
MY BODY IS READY!

JBL

2813518 Welp, the main thing is that it's here. How often do you plan on posting the new chapters, once or twice a week or just an endless flood?

Welcome to FimFitcion Silias,

Where things are tougher on the stories, but more organized.

Also it's Wolfdragon1 and Pinkie and Primus will welcome you too. Guys...

Primus: (Laying down and reading a book.). Hey.

Pinkie: (Jumps in your face). HI! Welcome to the number spot for all pony fanfics and I'm sure that readers from Fanfiction will also fav this too. So I recommend you buckle up and get ready for some hateful comments. We know Wolfy had to deal with it, right Primus?

Primus: (Not looking away from the book). Apparently people hate the idea of another alicorn, but it's growing on them from Twilight's change.

Wolfdragon: Well that's all the time we have.

Pinkie: But...

Wolfdragon: (Pushes Pinkie from screen). Like I said, out of time.

Primus: And be careful, you don't what dangers lie among the site.

2814904 Oh don't worry. I'm more aware of the dangers than you might guess. I've watched the way stories and comments work here carefully before daring to venture into these deeper waters.

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deep water full of mystery and danger.......tiny tim went into the water.......the water accepted ........but then tiny tim wanted to leave the water.........one does not simpy leave................there is a price to pay for leavin the water.......... and boy did tiny tim pay hehe...................he did get to leave the water........ but what was found ............was an unconscious ......black and pink pony with a crutch for a cutiemark....... and a blindfold made of pony fictions......and a smile on his face.......its not easy tredding the deep waters...... but damn is it fun
(if you don't get it its a crappy jaws reference of the way quint talked)

2815614 I got it. Wouldn't call it crappy. Had me a little creeped out for a moment.

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I guess its done his purpose then:rainbowwild: I honestly didn't expect anyone to get creeped lol:trollestia:

cannot wait for the next chapter.

2826057 Okay, okay, chill! I'm working on it.

"Within reason of course."
What exactly do you mean by that, do you really think that the gentle and innocent people of fimfiction would do something naughty?
Dohoho...

Keep being Awesome!

Well at least the story didn't start off with him in the Everfree Forest fighting a timberwolf.

Way to leave an impression there Lewis! :rainbowlaugh:

Well, this is getting pretty interesting. Well written, couldn't spot any noticeable spelling errors and such, which is always good to see an author paying close attention to. Have a favourite! Looking forward to what you have next! :pinkiehappy:

2827247 Some credit goes to JBL, my proof-reader and editor. Believe me, there were plenty of errors first time around.

2827201 I would never DREAM of accusing such gentle souls of anything . . . perverted. You're all perfect angels, of course. :scootangel:

I find this to be a good start to a story. I do hope you rite more. So keep up the good work.

2830214 HCK!! Your profile pic. Love it. Just... write, not rite.

2830782 It's the mark of the wayfarer. Glad you approve, it holds a lot of personal significance to me..

2830815 Ummm... Little odd, my comment was to the previous reviewer, the one with the pic of a guy with Luna on his lap... Awkward...:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

2830848 Huh. Still getting used to the way comments work here. No worries, I'm used to being more than a little awkward. And weird, don't forget weird.

SILAS! Welcome to FimFic mon frere!
It is good to see you, no? I hope you are settling in mon ami. Feel free to PM me if you ever wish to talk.

With Respect,

Magus Neon, Equestrian Nomad

I.P.P.P.S.:pinkiehappy:
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! A fine Welcome to you!
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! I say how do you do?
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! I say Hi-Hip-Hooray!
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! To FimFiction toooodaaaay!
YAY!!

2834863 Well now that brightened me right up. Thanks Magus. Things are going okay, and I seem to be getting some positive responses here. I'm glad the FimFiction crowd has been so welcoming. :pinkiehappy:

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Unlike on FanFic, we're ALL Bronies here mon ami, the warm welcome should come as no surprise. By the way, Ah' must say that re-readn' dis story is like findin' un half forgotten toy in a closet, the joy of getting to see this masterpiece start again from the beginning is beyond words. BTW, Ah' stumbled back across this scene in dis' chapter

As he emerged, the beauty of what he was seeing struck him like a hammer. A hill overlooking all of Sweet Apple Acres rose above him, with the full moon hanging overhead. There, atop the hill, sat a familiar. He moved closer, remaining silent as he approached, for fear that the beautiful sight would melt away or shatter if he disturbed the silence.

We must find someone to draw this mon frere.
Talk to you soon,
Magus Neon, Equestrian Nomad

Things just got more interesting :pinkiehappy:

2834994 You save my butt again. I just noticed the error in that paragraph, it's supposed to say "familiar silhouette" but apparently both I and my editor missed that. You rock Magus!

I have enjoyed this story and hope to see more soon, so keep up the good work. it well be interesting to know why Bourbon sent his master throw the portal. Was it mine control? if so, then who the person that made this happen?

Well...that was FAST! :rainbowderp: Fluttershy just allowed some random stallion she barely knew to rut her. Even took her virginity! Am I missing something here?

2838880 Context. I write for fun, to please and challenge myself. I had never written anything remotely erotic before. Including this stuff was a fun way to keep things interesting, and some of the people reading at the time were asking for sex scenes so I figured I might as well, just to see if I could, with no clue that there would ever be more than a few good friends bothering to read it. I at least had the dignity not to turn the story into a full blown orgy. Future projects will be more . . . restrained.:twilightsheepish:

JBL

2835046 Huh, so I missed that... well that's embarassing! :twilightblush:

2842470 We both missed it. No worries my friend, you worked hard and it's an enormous help. :pinkiehappy:

JBL

Think I missed one:

She's probably worried what Granny Smith er Big Macintosh

and

This story is awesome, why would anyone dislike it?!

Well I'm new to this site and this is the second story I've read so far. I've really enjoyed this it has a good amount of lightheartedness that makes it a comfortable read. Please continue :twilightsmile:

I wish I could press the like button 100 for this story!

2851269 Screams from the haters: got a nice ring to it.
I guess every super-hero needs his theme-music.

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